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A Mountain's Sigh (Haikus) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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A mountain's sigh calls whispered on the breeze I hear the Earth sing to me ~*~ The wind blows gently A mountain's sigh is heard clear rest now, Winter comes ~*~ With snow falling free A mountain's sigh is so soft waiting for Spring time ~SEA~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, how are these done, I'm as confused by these as I am by Parandelladodos' or whatever they are called. I'm a simple soul you know I can't manage the hard stuff. (Oh did you get the voizmail?) I hope so. Take care Mushy And is your email working yet? Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
youre on a roll girl ha..very nice..enjoyed  black bears hibernate sleeping until the springtime in the warmth of caves ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You weave these with gentleness and beauty.........insightful, delicate, and beautiful. This isn't a type of poetry I normally care for, but I loved this! Thank you! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey girl! These are wonderful Haiku's. Amazing how much beauty you can fit into such a small place isn't it? Great job! You've brought out the beauty in winter. <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~ I sent you an E to the Melody? I think that was the one...check it I'll e-mail you later on how to do these.....thanks Victoria~ thank you, these are so fun to do DreamK~thank you for reading  Dovey~ thanks, I really like them! -SEA |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
What a great celebration of winter Love these all!!!Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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FlyHigh Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 84Bekkestua, Norway |
I don't care much for winter, but the haikus were good. =) gJ -- "Luck affects everything. Let your hook always be cast; in the stream where you least expect it there will be a fish." Ovid (BC 43-18 AD) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely haikus, SEA. Nature is so beautiful at the changing of seasons. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
These are great! Especially loved the first one, awesome! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just like snowflakes. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A shameless bump, just in case someone missed these. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
These cannot be missed...they fly alone or in a group...of great! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very nice...im impressed at the quality of haiku you are able to pen in so short a time Keep up the good work man!!! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
SEA-- Lovely haikus. Enjoyed all three of them. Poeminister |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
These are truly beautiful Sea...a pleasure to read...I'm in awe of these little beauties and in poet envy of anyone that can write them so well You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love these, sweet friend, I am so lucky to live next door to the Rocky Mountains and I always love to go up to Estes Park and overlook Pikes Peak and the Royal Gorge all-year round, it s majestic! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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