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SEA
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0 posted 2000-11-17 09:59 AM



A mountain's sigh calls
whispered on the breeze I hear
the Earth sing to me

~*~

The wind blows gently
A mountain's sigh is heard clear
rest now, Winter comes

~*~

With snow falling free
A mountain's sigh is so soft
waiting for Spring time

~SEA~

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1 posted 2000-11-17 10:27 AM


Circe, how are these done, I'm as confused by these as I am by Parandelladodos' or whatever they are called. I'm a simple soul you know I can't manage the hard stuff.
(Oh did you get the voizmail?) I hope so.
Take care
                  Mushy
And is your email working yet?



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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2 posted 2000-11-17 10:28 AM


youre on a roll girl ha..very nice..enjoyed

black bears hibernate
sleeping until the springtime
in the warmth of caves

           ~Victoria~



A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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3 posted 2000-11-17 10:29 AM


You weave these with gentleness and beauty.........insightful, delicate, and beautiful.  This isn't a type of poetry I normally care for, but I loved this!  Thank you!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-11-17 10:46 AM


Hey girl! These are wonderful Haiku's.
Amazing how much beauty you can fit into such a small place isn't it?

Great job! You've brought out the beauty in winter.  

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD

SEA
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5 posted 2000-11-17 11:15 AM


Mushy~ I sent you an E to the Melody? I think that was the one...check it   I'll e-mail you later on how to do these.....thanks  

Victoria~ thank you, these are so fun to do  

DreamK~thank you for reading  

Dovey~ thanks, I really like them!  

-SEA

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6 posted 2000-11-17 12:03 PM


What a great celebration of winter   Love these all!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

FlyHigh
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7 posted 2000-11-18 01:56 PM


I don't care much for winter, but the haikus were good. =)

gJ

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Ovid (BC 43-18 AD)


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8 posted 2000-11-18 08:33 PM


Lovely haikus, SEA.  Nature is so beautiful at the changing of seasons.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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9 posted 2000-11-19 03:20 AM


These are great! Especially loved the first one, awesome!  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


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10 posted 2000-11-19 02:41 PM


just like snowflakes. . .



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


EagleOne
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11 posted 2000-11-21 06:25 AM


A shameless bump, just in case someone missed these.  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


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12 posted 2000-11-21 08:48 AM


These cannot be missed...they fly alone or in a group...of great!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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13 posted 2000-11-22 09:53 PM


very nice...im impressed at the quality of haiku you are able to pen in so short a time

Keep up the good work man!!!

Poeminister
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14 posted 2000-11-22 10:17 PM


SEA-- Lovely haikus.  Enjoyed all three of them.  

Poeminister

Butterflies_dont_cry
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15 posted 2000-11-22 10:21 PM


These are truly beautiful Sea...a pleasure
to read...I'm in awe of these little
beauties and in poet envy of anyone that
can write them so well  


You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~

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16 posted 2002-04-03 02:36 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love these, sweet friend, I am so lucky to live next door to the Rocky Mountains and I always love to go up to Estes Park and overlook Pikes Peak and the Royal Gorge all-year round, it s majestic! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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