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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-11-19 05:00 PM


"Charlie's Angels"

The three of us you love so much
You have made our family a loving home
Please never blame yourself
For Linda's need to run free and roam

Now Lisa is dissapointing you as well
With all these lies and the deciet
But I beg of you not to turn the pain inside
And give up in bitter defeat

I see the hurt in your eyes
How my heart breaks for you
I being the eldest understand
More than your other two

Promises you made to a lady in the wall
You have done your very best
It's time for you to lay down your shame and pain
Please put it to rest

The three of us are grown now
Making our own choices, both good and bad
I know watching them throw their lives away
Breaks you heart, surrounding clouds of sad

Do my best not to dissapoint you or myself
But I too have my flaws, we all surely do
Things are going to get better Dad
By your side I shall stand and fight with you

Charlie's Angels will mend the fences
Someday, things will be made right
We just got to keep moving from the darkness
Finding our way to love, the eternal light



© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2000-11-19 05:03 PM


Is your Dad's name really Charlie? Amy this is a very deep rooted family poem and I bless you for having such a strong heart..ethome.
Aimster
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2 posted 2000-11-19 06:11 PM


ethome-
thank you for your heartfelt reply. and
yes my dad's name is Charles, but he goes
by either chuck or charlie. take care.
~amy~

Marsha
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3 posted 2000-11-19 06:29 PM


Amy, I know Charlie will be as proud as the proverbial peacock, this is one fabulous poem. I love this one, I truly do, you are such a wonderful daughter, and I know that both your mam and your pops are proud of you. Your mam will be telling all the other angels that her Amy is a whizz at writing angel songs. As for your pops he will be the one leaning on the fence pointing out to all and sundry that you are the star in his sky.
Fantastic write from you love.
Take care
           Mushy
                         


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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4 posted 2000-11-19 06:40 PM


Sweet piece, Angel # 3. ;o}

better not leat the others see, if there be sibling rivalry...;o} tee hee

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5 posted 2002-04-03 02:23 PM




(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have  avery loving heart of gold as does your dad and your siblings and I know together you will all find true happiness and your love will live on! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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