Open Poetry #11 |
Charlie's Angels |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
"Charlie's Angels" The three of us you love so much You have made our family a loving home Please never blame yourself For Linda's need to run free and roam Now Lisa is dissapointing you as well With all these lies and the deciet But I beg of you not to turn the pain inside And give up in bitter defeat I see the hurt in your eyes How my heart breaks for you I being the eldest understand More than your other two Promises you made to a lady in the wall You have done your very best It's time for you to lay down your shame and pain Please put it to rest The three of us are grown now Making our own choices, both good and bad I know watching them throw their lives away Breaks you heart, surrounding clouds of sad Do my best not to dissapoint you or myself But I too have my flaws, we all surely do Things are going to get better Dad By your side I shall stand and fight with you Charlie's Angels will mend the fences Someday, things will be made right We just got to keep moving from the darkness Finding our way to love, the eternal light |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Is your Dad's name really Charlie? Amy this is a very deep rooted family poem and I bless you for having such a strong heart..ethome. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
ethome- thank you for your heartfelt reply. and yes my dad's name is Charles, but he goes by either chuck or charlie. take care. ~amy~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, I know Charlie will be as proud as the proverbial peacock, this is one fabulous poem. I love this one, I truly do, you are such a wonderful daughter, and I know that both your mam and your pops are proud of you. Your mam will be telling all the other angels that her Amy is a whizz at writing angel songs. As for your pops he will be the one leaning on the fence pointing out to all and sundry that you are the star in his sky. Fantastic write from you love. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sweet piece, Angel # 3. ;o} better not leat the others see, if there be sibling rivalry...;o} tee hee |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have avery loving heart of gold as does your dad and your siblings and I know together you will all find true happiness and your love will live on! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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