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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
After the symphony... The knowledge that you exist in all your beauty sends my mind reeling among thousands of unnamed stars Each, a work of art yet, I'd wager, unable to hold a flame to you, for the shimmers in your eyes are limitless... -R.T. {Tiersdin} |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
R.T., WELCOME to Passions...this is a most lovely entrance into a wonderful world! I hope you will take the time to explore, enjoy, sit back and relax, and come to know all of us in time. and check your e-mail for a special message. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I am so THRILLED to see you here! (  says Kellie! ) A diamond added to the group. You've made my day. Have missed your writing so much! Excellent, R.T.!!!!To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I am aware that you have shared some beautiful feelings here in a very romantic way....James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RT~ WELCOME! This made me *SIGH* loved this -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiersdin~ This is a lovely entrancing piece. Welcome to this family of poets ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! This was absolutely beautiful! I loved it! What a way to make an entrance, and I can't wait to read more!! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
awesome, I loved every line, look forward to more. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hello, R.T. - Welcome to our Passionate home.. It's a wonderful place, and your poetry looks like it'll find a good home here... Settle in and make yourself comfy..  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'The knowledge that you exist in all your beauty sends my mind reeling among thousands of unnamed stars' Excellent write, Tiersdin! Love it!! Welcome to Passions!  sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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aurora rain Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 90 |
beau-ti-FUL. an enchanting read. left me mesmerised. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions.....and this is a wonderful entrance......excellent work. love it Charisma |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Tiersden, Welcome to the real Symphony at Passions. Good start. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely work - short and simple and eloquent... welcome to our home... KThe wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow! What an entrance! This is a lovely poem, welcome to the family. I look forward to reading a lot more from you. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is stunning. Welcome to Passions. I was so taken by this, especially the text format you selected. It is very, very welcome and look forward to reading more. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Hello and welcome to Passions! this was beautiful, a stunning first piece. truly romantic and wonderful! looking forward to reading more from you. take care. ~amy~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
a very sincere and romantic piece, good poet. You are very welcome here.......... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
welcome to passions!!!!!!!! what a GRAND entrance Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very lovely and romantic indeed..and welcome to Passions.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMM yes...so very aware...this is lovely...welcome to our world |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i have a soft spot for short poems and i absolutely loved the depth of emotion you expressed within so few words... will be looking forward to more oops, and WELCOME! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
And so a star is born. .m. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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