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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Come, gentle rain soothe burning desires thoughts of him do bring Cool, please my inner passions with your tender tears for, I am the desert in the absence of his love... -R.T. 1/00 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful appeal for the tears that can help ease the pain "in the absense of his love" good write here...take care...ethome.... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Wow...this is excellent. Though the weave was brief the message and the content were delivered with to perfection...very much enjoyed! You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I am the desert in the absence of his love - sums it up perfectly. Says so much with so few words. Corinne |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you ethome, butterflies_don't_cry, and Corrine... you comments are very much appreciated! *smiles* -Tier |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOO!! i love this  and feel every line..... great little ditty this is.. hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Tiersdin! Beautiful use of imagery in this lovely piece, very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes..yes I have felt exactly these feelings...wait a minute...I think I'm feeling them right now...James |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
So much can be said in so little. wonderfully written. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i liked this line too: i am the desert in the absence of his love... wunnerful line that says it all |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, everyone for taking the time to comment. This is one of the warmest places I've had the pleasure of posting my poetry to on the net. *hugs* -Tier |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
A beauty that could only have been written by R.T. I loved it. So thrilled you're here.To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks Kelly! *hugs* I'm glad that you found such a wonderful place! -Tier |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Tier, I wanna reach out and give your past self a hug. Much nicer than my past self.  Mikey |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like Arizona |
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