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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2000-11-19 12:14 PM

Come, gentle rain
soothe burning desires
thoughts of him do bring
Cool, please
my inner passions
with your tender tears
for,
I am the desert
in the absence
of his love...

-R.T.
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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2000-11-19 12:20 PM

Beautiful appeal for the tears that can help ease the pain "in the absense of his love" good write here...take care...ethome....

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

2 posted 2000-11-19 12:21 PM

Wow...this is excellent. Though the weave
was brief the message and the content were
delivered with to perfection...very much
enjoyed!

You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

3 posted 2000-11-19 12:24 PM

I am the desert
in the absence
of his love -

sums it up perfectly. Says so much with so few words.

Corinne

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2000-11-19 01:03 PM

Thank you ethome, butterflies_don't_cry, and Corrine... you comments are very much appreciated!

*smiles*
-Tier

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2000-11-19 01:06 PM

WOO!! i love this

and feel every line.....

great little ditty this is..

hugs, dg

"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2000-11-19 01:07 PM

Wonderful Tiersdin! Beautiful use of imagery in this lovely piece, very nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-11-19 02:10 PM

Yes..yes I have felt exactly these feelings...wait a minute...I think I'm feeling them right now...James

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

8 posted 2000-11-19 03:39 PM

So much can be said in so little.
wonderfully written.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2000-11-19 06:34 PM

i liked this line too:

i am the desert
in the absence
of his love...

wunnerful line that says it all

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

10 posted 2000-11-21 09:22 AM

Thank you, everyone for taking the time to comment. This is one of the warmest places I've had the pleasure of posting my poetry to on the net.

*hugs*

-Tier

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

11 posted 2000-11-21 11:43 AM

A beauty that could only have been written by R.T.

I loved it. So thrilled you're here.

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

12 posted 2000-11-21 11:48 AM

Thanks Kelly!

*hugs*

I'm glad that you found such a wonderful place!

-Tier

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

13 posted 2002-09-16 06:22 PM

Tier,
I wanna reach out and give your past self a hug.

Much nicer than my past self.

Mikey

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2003-01-27 10:12 AM

like Arizona

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