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Charisma
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0 posted 2000-11-23 03:39 PM



WINTER

King Winter entrance
snowfight change, I've hit you all
SPLASH, with my snowball




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dgvarner
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1 posted 2000-11-23 05:31 PM


weeeee...arent snowball fights fun!  

very cute  

hugs, dg


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2 posted 2000-11-23 05:54 PM


woohoo such fun
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3 posted 2000-11-23 06:04 PM


Hi Charisma....
I love Haiku, and yours is wonderful, and you already know I love graphics!! Great job. Would you believe I'm up here in Alaska, and it's dry as a bone.....no snow!!


Write on!
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4 posted 2000-11-23 09:52 PM


Excellent Charisma!!

And I've got some snowballs that you can have!  

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5 posted 2000-11-24 08:11 AM


DG: Yeah........they are fun

Paula:   it is!

Sunny: living in Alaska and no snow, what a shame, well telling you the truth, there is here no snow either.....I was hit by a virtual snowfight, and well this haiku was born.
btw.... thank you for your visit on my homepage, Its still under construction, hope to work on it soon.

Sven: thank you for your kind reply....and well throw the snowballs over...    

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6 posted 2000-11-24 10:33 AM


Cute!!  

Denise

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7 posted 2000-11-24 11:13 AM


Nice poem!!!!!!
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8 posted 2000-11-25 10:52 AM


Thank you Denise and Vandana for stopping by and your reply.    
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9 posted 2000-11-25 10:56 AM


This was great. Bravo!!!!I love snowball fights. Thank you so much for sharing.

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10 posted 2000-11-26 11:00 AM


Startime: yeah snowbalfights are great....  
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11 posted 2000-11-26 11:24 AM


this brought a smile to my face

no snow in the place i reside either...i empathise with you

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12 posted 2000-11-26 11:34 AM


Charisma,

   I loooove haiku   It is a cute fun little haiku.. but.. I hope the snow gods didn't hear you..lol.  I do not want snow hehe.  



~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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13 posted 2000-11-27 08:12 AM


Kaile: I am glad that this one made you smile, and the winter just start, I truly hope that we will have a white Christmas.....

Rosepetals: I am glad that you like the haiku, but I truly hope that there will be snow with the hollidays.... but well we wait and will see, maybe they will listen to you this year  

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(giggles in delight) Hey, that was  acheap shot, oooohhhhhh...you're going to be buried in snow now! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This wonderful senryu shows that you ahve always been the talented friend and poetess you are, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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