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Christmas (haiku) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Snow falling gently family snuggles 'round fire as love surrounds them [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i presume this is your first senryu(note:haiku is about nature; senryu is about everything else)...if so, this was well done and i look forward to seeing more welcome to the club, budding haikuist  |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Ahhhhhh, beautiful.......Left me with a gentle sigh of happiness. Thank you! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love this form of writing and this one is wonderful. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love this senryu.... well done Aimster. Charisma |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Haiku, tanka, senryu heck I have a hard time remember which is which too...But...I like this. (I too, am new to this form of writtiing-but I like it. Hey we can all learn together.) -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Amy~ very pretty picture you have painted here -SEA |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good job Aimster! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely images amy..enjoyed ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Amy, This is so very beautiful and keeps me warm inside. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Invoked warm cuddlies inside me. Bring on the hot chocolate and marshmellows! jwesley |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thanks all for the kind words... just trying out "new waters" you could say. Thanks to all who explained to me the difference between an senryu and a haiku. I think I understand the difference LOL. Seriously, thank you all for taking the time to read and respond. Take care. ~amy~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, just that feeling of being hugged with the rest of my family at Christmas makes me feel so warm and happy inside! (kiss on cheek) Your gorgeous words always radiate with such warmth and love and sharing, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-03-2002 02:59 PM).] |
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