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Sven
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0 posted 2000-11-22 11:44 PM


green eyes
passionate words
tender voice
never heard

silken verses
playful pen
beauty art
sprit zen

quiet heart
smile bright
gentle touch
starry night

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-11-22 11:47 PM


YES! this is Devina.

Sven i am so glad you captured this lil one on page she is a poet extrordinaire yuh yuh

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-11-22 11:55 PM


Where does she hide? I don't know her! But her voice shall be heard...if we could find her among your quote...she is the one, for words were wrote...

where then does she hide?


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
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Kethry
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3 posted 2000-11-23 08:05 AM


Sven,
who is this mystery woman, where can I meet her?
Thanks for introducing someone who sounds wonderful.
Write on
Kethry


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Rex E. Alford

ethome
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4 posted 2000-11-23 03:51 PM


Short and concise Sven but says a lot..this poet will be proud...ethome
Sven
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5 posted 2000-11-23 09:59 PM


walt, yes she is my friend. . .  

Sunshine, she hides not, but can be seen many places. . . thank you. . .

Kethry, she posted here recently, and you can find her in the archives. . . she's a wonderful poet, and a wonderful person. . .

ethome, thank you for reading my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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6 posted 2000-11-24 12:48 PM


This is wonderful.  I'm really enjoying this series of yours.



passion is life. . . ~Diana


Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-11-24 11:46 PM


Sven~
Our Devina is indeed a lovely poet.
I so enjoy her friendship and her poetry.
She is a deep river that runs in and out of
Passions ... ever flowing so gently.

Thank you for this lovely portrait of her.
~*Marge*~


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kaile
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8 posted 2000-11-29 12:10 PM


does Devina express herself using short poems? if so, i will keep a lookout for her from now on....

oh, i dig short poetry and i liked this one, esp the second verse

Irish Rose
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9 posted 2000-11-29 12:16 PM


I enjoyed this, Sven, I love simple, short poems and it highlighted the kind of poet she is!  Thank you for the time you took in posting this.

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman



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10 posted 2000-11-29 01:05 PM


Another one to add to the glowing pictures you paint. Simply divine.   thank you so much for the read.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

CocoBaci
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11 posted 2000-12-28 08:54 PM



SVEN, another great one you have penned...

I enjoyed this one much PoetFriend...

Coco


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12 posted 2005-04-22 08:17 PM


lovely
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