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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Gallery Reading Room how do I know that she's there? I can't see her or touch her so, how do I know? I know because I see her smile in every sunrise I feel her arms in every breeze she's there and the power of her love fills my heart and I'm no longer alone I hear her voice in every silence I touch her face in every shadow she's there and the power of my love touches her soul and she's alive once more so, how do I know that she's there? how do I feel her? how does she feel me? I don't know. . . . . . I'll ask her. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven....... I have a feeling she will always be there for you, my friend....... This is so wonderful to read, it's like a tropical breeze within my snowy day!! Thank you for this one!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that's the only way to "know"...nice one Sven..  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, every woman loves to be asked, nice one, Sven! "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll bet it's because you can read her thoughts... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven she knows, it's in everything you write, it's the same way you know. I love this one absolutely brilliant write from you love, truly wonderful as always Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
Written from a romantic heart. I liked this a lot. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, Wow, some times you just amaze me, just when I feel the world sits up side down I read words from your heart and WOW, this I shall keep, thank you friend. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
interesting concept,sven...it always amazes me how emotionally attached i can get to my on-line friends... nice one |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, Sven. I like the feel of this one, a little touch of happiness in our worlds of sad. Take care. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes you again write to touch the heart of your reader. Sven, I am always impressed and touched by your words for they come from a large loving heart. Much love from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
What beautiful thoughts and so well written!!!  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, a single glance is all you need to know she loves in truth ans deed. on the sunrise smiles are sent perchance this love is heaven meant but be wise and use your lips to keep her at your fingertips follow your heart and just be true and find that love's returned to you. Be well, you're swell Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
Beautiful words, I pray they are real. Emily |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunny1, I hope so. . .and you're welcome. . . Wynter, thank you my friend. . . Kathleen, then why do I never get the right answer? Thank you. . . Sunshine, you might be right. . . Marsha, thank you love. . . but what happens if I don't know? thanks again. . .Lana, thank you, that's me. . . Cerenity, you are welcome my friend. . . always glad to help keep your world on the up and up!! kaile, thanks. . . and yes it is surprising sometimes. . . why is that?? Sandra, I thought that we could use a little happiness around here, what with the new year and all. . . thank you. . . Karen, thank you my friend as always. . . your heart is indeed large and loving as well. . . pepper, thank you!!!! Kethry. . . you always amaze me with your words. . .thank you. . . Emily, I share your prayer as well. . . thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yes....that is love. love this a lot Charisma |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
truly touching poem Sven...as only you can write...a ghost of a smile touched my lips for a fleeting moment. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
charisma, thank you. . . sonjes, welcome back. . . missed you. . . and I'm glad that I could bring a smile to your face for that moment. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
But what will she say? Great poem. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I know because I see her smile in every sunrise I feel her arms in every breeze she's there and the power of her love fills my heart and I'm no longer alone' Beautiful writing, Sven! Absolutely love this!! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
ohhh the power of love.... Sven once again, your words.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious |
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