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Tropical Monsoon Tanka |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Heads huddled downwards~ Beaten by cold pounding rains~ Shivering numbness~ Getting wet feet at puddles~ Yearning for elusive snow |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
kaile, Want to trade?? LOL. It is freezing cold here. Too cold to snow at the moment I believe, but we already had a dusting earlier this week. Nice tanka.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kaile- this made me shiver just reading it.. 'tanka' for the chill...lol. i like it alot. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
kaile, sending snow your way. . . wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You can have our snow, too. You're going to be snowed in! Nice tanka.To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
brrrr..nice cold, wet tanka! hugs,dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Monsoon tanka, you don't see that everyday, very creative this tanka snapshot! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx all for replying...i do hope i will get to witness snow for myself one fine day...sigh |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
kaile, I love this. Excellent tanka. It makes the reader feel the shiver and coldness of the moment sharply. Very well done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Something must be wrong with me.......I love this kind of rain.........I'm much happier with it when I'm inside, but I can be out in this as well Beautiful Tanka! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ This is so well done. Forget the snow ... Man !   ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yes, like I guess, this is the December monsoon season in Singapore. It's the Christmas season, and everyone in the northern hemisphere is experiencing snowy white winter. What we have in the equatorial region, is something that is almost as cold as winter, but just sadly, not as white. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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