Open Poetry #11 |
Solace(How i feel about Passions today...have you felt the same way before?) |
kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
A dominant volcano threatens to erupt irritated, frustrated, i travel the world with my fingers, reading heart-woven words from friends, oozing with warmth and concern and love the tiniest crack of a smile plays on my lips the domineering headache recedes... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yes, I have.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, me too, enjoyed this -SEA |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
This Age Communication Electronic Walkways Tend To Lead To PersonsCaring By Foot Or Byte It Is All The Same To The HeartMind Reaching |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Ah, kaile, it is always a joy to read your work. Powerful, yet compacted, and this is just yet another one that makes me respect and admire you as a poet With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Exactly.Art is there to heal our emotional pain through shared experience. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
kaile..yes...it does tend to ease the headaches away at times... to go to a place where .."everybody knows your name" lol hugs, dg ps..working on that tanka for you....slow goin! "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're so right a source of solace for sure great poetic idea and well written....ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Yes, I certainly have. Really wonderful work here. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Oh I think everyone in this place can relate. What a way to put it! Great place isn't it? <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have to agree with the masses on this one. Yes, I believe that we all have felt like this and you have penned it beautifully. Superb piece of penning. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh! yuh! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, I have and thank you for bringing it to light for everyone! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Exactly. . . just like right now. . . Excellent Kaile. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I come here to read after work..stress gradually leaves as I read and relax. I think this place is a definite lifesaver! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ So very nice to see your muse hard at work. Sometimes, even the volcano eruptions can be seen in the poetry of some. But, oh what a display ! Wonderful thoughts here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Dynamic use of images to express how you feel, very well said! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kaile-- beautiful! and yes i have...passions is great for curing headaches and more take care. ~amy~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
It opens worlds where dreams reside, some real, some fantasy, all alive, vivid, beautiful, real, even if only for a time. Yep, guess I agree. jwesley |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi all, im humbled by the lovely responses you guys have so generously given.....im grateful for finding this place and for the fact that now i will have one more means at hand to deal with those awful headaches..... thanx for reading |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
DITTO sweetie... I get that feeling too and may I add that you've penned a splendid poem... Coco |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you CoCo for your kind words... |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yes, I do agree... The friends here in the forum don't judge, they just comfort you when you're feeling down, share your triumph and your joys... They are great! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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