Open Poetry #11 |
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Solace(How i feel about Passions today...have you felt the same way before?) |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore ![]() |
A dominant volcano threatens to erupt irritated, frustrated, i travel the world with my fingers, reading heart-woven words from friends, oozing with warmth and concern and love the tiniest crack of a smile plays on my lips the domineering headache recedes... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yes, I have.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, me too, enjoyed this ![]() |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
This Age Communication Electronic Walkways Tend To Lead To PersonsCaring By Foot Or Byte It Is All The Same To The HeartMind Reaching |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Ah, kaile, it is always a joy to read your work. Powerful, yet compacted, and this is just yet another one that makes me respect and admire you as a poet ![]() With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Exactly.Art is there to heal our emotional pain through shared experience. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
kaile..yes...it does tend to ease the headaches away at times... ![]() ![]() hugs, dg ps..working on that tanka for you....slow goin! ![]() "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're so right a source of solace for sure great poetic idea and well written....ethome |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Yes, I certainly have. Really wonderful work here. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Oh I think everyone in this place can relate. What a way to put it! ![]() Great place isn't it? <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I have to agree with the masses on this one. Yes, I believe that we all have felt like this and you have penned it beautifully. Superb piece of penning. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
yuh! yuh! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, I have and thank you for bringing it to light for everyone! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Exactly. . . just like right now. . . Excellent Kaile. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I come here to read after work..stress gradually leaves as I read and relax. I think this place is a definite lifesaver! ![]() |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ So very nice to see your muse hard at work. Sometimes, even the volcano eruptions can be seen in the poetry of some. But, oh what a display ! Wonderful thoughts here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Dynamic use of images to express how you feel, very well said! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kaile-- beautiful! and yes i have...passions is great for curing headaches and more ![]() take care. ~amy~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
It opens worlds where dreams reside, some real, some fantasy, all alive, vivid, beautiful, real, even if only for a time. Yep, guess I agree. jwesley |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi all, im humbled by the lovely responses you guys have so generously given.....im grateful for finding this place and for the fact that now i will have one more means at hand to deal with those awful headaches..... thanx for reading ![]() |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
DITTO sweetie... I get that feeling too and may I add that you've penned a splendid poem... ![]() ![]() |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you CoCo for your kind words... |
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Mon Cherie![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yes, I do agree... The friends here in the forum don't judge, they just comfort you when you're feeling down, share your triumph and your joys... They are great! ![]() _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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