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Winters Solstice
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Winters Solstice |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
What fortress speaks of winters mood while summer cries do fill the air of wonderment in brash holidays that take me away from here. In simple times I have failed my tongue allowing my soul to sink till I could fathom no more my hearts bleeding for sake of thee. To which I lived my small lie thinking I had won the game when life finnally came alive the game had won over me. Now summers cries fill my head as winter has come to me my heart begins tofloorish once more letting my winter solstice a chance to breathe. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
even after reading this 3 times i haven't had enough it. i'll be reading this one many times! Snow |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
"To which I lived my small lie thinking I had won the game When life finally came alive The game had won over me" EXCELLENT. I loved this part especially. Says so much and is so often very true. A keeper. Thank you! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I love the feelings expressed in this poem... great writing... -Tier |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Michael* This is excellent! It is so nice to have your poetry gracing the pages of Passions again...you are missed when you are away!! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I agree with Snow. I could read this a thousand times and not tire of it.  Welcome back!!! Missed you! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
------------------------------------------- In simple times I have failed my tongue allowing my soul to sink till I could fathom no more my hearts bleeding for sake of thee. To which I lived my small lie thinking I had won the game when life finnally came alive the game had won over me. -------------------------------------------- MICHAEL, I'm captured in this poem I've read it twice before and yet when I flip back the pages I still return to read it again once more... So, here I am to tell ya I might as well put your poem into my library cus it's an excellent write... coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-07-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Aw yes Michael like the saying I always refer to..."there's always sunshine after rain" love the lone cry in this one as you take the reader through the scenes...very good!! |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
I too have missed your work. I've been quite busy, but it's always wonderful to see your words. The Solstice comes soon. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I just had to bring this back in light of yesterday's events!! So many missed this "newly published" jewel. CONGRADULATIONS!!!!!!!   Love, Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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