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Midnight Dew
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 50
Forest Lake, MN

0 posted 2001-01-07 04:08 AM

All right, this is my first post ever, so everyone please be kind to me! I wrote this today, and it's major mush, but that's all right!

Who loves me with all his heart?
Who feels that of him I am a part?
No one but you.

Who kisses me and holds me close?
Who wants me around the most?
No one but you.

Who makes me forget myself?
Who makes me think of no one else?
No one but you.

Who has the eyes that I get lost in?
Who in contests lets me win?
No one but you.

Who holds my hand when he gets tired?
Who jumps in the snow when he gets wired?
No one but you.

Who has taken over my life in it's whole?
Who do I love, with all my heart and soul?
No one but you.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

1 posted 2001-01-07 04:12 AM

Midnight Dew....
Welcome to Passions and I hope you enjoy it here as much as I do.

This is a wonderful poem you've posted.
I especially like that last stanza....
(and don't worry... I like mush)

Hehe

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-01-07 06:47 AM

Many well chosen words of admiration...from no one but you...James

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2001-01-07 07:04 AM

Midnight Dew~
Warm welcome to passions
You don't have to worry about us being kind or not we are always kind I hope you enjoy yourself at passions it's a great place to be

I liked your poem and I too loved the last stanza...well done, great first post
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-01-07 07:13 AM

Welcome to Passions Midnight Dew...I like your "name!" You'll find mush, kittens, nature, scheming...dreaming...all sorts of things written of and for and about others...and this is a good start for you! Check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

5 posted 2001-01-07 07:29 AM

I liked your poem alot. great writing. 90 percent of what I write is mush. Welcome to Passions.
love and light,
Richard

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

6 posted 2001-01-07 08:21 AM

thanks for a beautiful first post, I'm also new here and its great, AP

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

7 posted 2001-01-07 08:43 AM

Wonderful poem, I loved the format and I think that this could easily make a wonderful song cause I hear the sounds of the muse echoing through my mind like a tune!

Nathan

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2001-01-07 10:09 AM

Welcome to passions........lovely entrance.
well done

Charisma

Midnight Dew
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 50
Forest Lake, MN

9 posted 2001-01-07 10:13 AM

Thank you all so much, I've never been much into poetry until recently, so I was a little self-conscious about posting this. Thank you for being so encouraging, and thank you Sunshine, for the cool greeting.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-01-07 11:29 AM

Welcome and keep writing, it is food for the soul and this place is full of Spam, White Castles, wine, why we have it all!!!!!!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-01-07 01:45 PM

Welcome my friend. . . yes, we've all been there. . . but this is the greatest group of people that you'll find anywhere. . . this is a wonderful poem, and I thank you for sharing it with us. . . and hey, take it from me. . . there's nothing wrong with a little mush!!

Hoping to see more from you. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

12 posted 2001-01-07 01:52 PM

Welcome! I hope he appreciates one who loves him so much.

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

13 posted 2001-01-07 05:50 PM

Wonderful poem, Midnight Dew.

I remember a time when things were like this, and it's the greatest feeling in the world.

I'm glad you're so happy. Keep up the writing!

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

*Majestria*
New Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 7

14 posted 2001-01-07 06:45 PM

I know the feeling and it's so very beautiful. Having someone love you so much is the best feeling you could ever experience. Beautiful just beautiful!!!!!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

15 posted 2001-01-07 08:08 PM

MorningDew,
welcome to passions! I really enjoyed the way you took the last verse and turned the lover to a child. Well done!
write on in song
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

16 posted 2001-01-07 08:35 PM

Welcome to passions

Enjoyed it

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

17 posted 2001-01-07 08:37 PM

Midnight Dew-Welcome to Passions and I think your mush is wonderful.

Night_Myst
Junior Member

since 2000-08-16

Posts 34
River Falls, WI

18 posted 2001-01-07 10:39 PM

Hello and welcome. Mush...I don't think there is such a thing...well, yes there is, but speaking from the heart is definately not mush. Good write and welcome.

Maverick Wolf
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 94
Scandia, MN

19 posted 2001-01-07 10:40 PM

Great job. I had to laugh at the second to last stanza. It's a wonderful piece that speaks of true happiness. I wish you all the best. I didn't know I had anything to offer in poetry, but we all find our niche. welcome to the fold, I'm sure you will find much enjoyment here.

[This message has been edited by Maverick Wolf (edited 01-07-2001).]

Quiet One
Junior Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 46
Shhhhh

20 posted 2001-01-07 10:46 PM

Lovely thoughts
welcome

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

21 posted 2001-01-07 11:57 PM

~WELCOME!

I liked the lovey-dovey sweetness of this
has the feelings of new love
I hope you stay awhile

~SEA

Midnight Dew
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 50
Forest Lake, MN

22 posted 2001-01-08 01:29 PM

Thanks again everybody for being so nice and so welcoming. I really appreciate all the comments.

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

23 posted 2001-02-11 08:24 PM

I am going to have to agree with Maverick Wolf on this one. The second to last stanza is rather humorous! Who gets weird enough to jump in the snow? I liked this poem, and it just happened to be in my private library. Wonderfully written, even though it is about a boy. At least that is what I'm guessing?
I am envious towards you for your writing skills.

~Alison~

"Close your eyes, and you'll see. Cover your ears, and you'll hear."

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