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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Heaven Scent the candlelight flickers~~ steam dressed porcelain giving a glimpse of shadowed memories as they dance in a heated tango the soft terry stimulates~~ tingles rise bumps on flesh that was ravished until it glowed and his scent rises~~ against her soul, pressing another image into her heart and the rain falls.... and her dreams begin... and her heart aches for that moment... that time, when his lips pressed tightly against her own.. when drops of heaven tasted... of him [This message has been edited by Snow (edited 11-17-2000).] |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
 sigh romantic feelings, so warm and wonderful  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Snow- I just LOVE reading your work! this is another wonderful write. i love the lovely, romantic picture you've painted with your words. excellent! hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
pepper...thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. vicky...you are so sweet! I love to get your replies! this piece is very special to me, so I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much! Snow |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it....so ful of romantic and warm feelings.....well done. Charisma |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautiful poem... tenderly romantic... -Tier |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Whew. Yes, very romantic write! Love it!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Neve, like a kiss that lingers...your words leave me wanting more . ~ek~ Robert Joseph |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Steam rose from this sensual weave...nothing like the first kiss upon your soul....this was exquisite~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
snow- this is very beautiful! awesome images you have penned. great poem! looking forward to reading more. take care. ~amy~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Snow. . . spoken like a True Romantic. . . we need more of those. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Suddenly I have a yearning for something salty...and that smells of Old Spice... |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
this is one of my favorites, i'm glad to see you enjoyed it as much as i did, when writing it ;-) thank you for all of the wonderful replies. snow "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Big Romantic Sigh I loved this. it feels so warm and fuzzy. great writing. love and light, Richard |
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