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Open Poetry #11

Sing Little Sparrow

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2000-12-30 09:51 AM

~Sing Little Sparrow~

In bliss you bask
in haven's nest
of silver wings
and golden strings,
you sing with joy
because you know,
if storm winds blow
the one who ~knows~
will carry you home
to heaven's nest
a cradle of rest,
in angel's wings
and golden strings,
you'll sing with glee
for all eternity,
so sing little sparrow
because you
~know~

BloomingRose

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-12-30 09:56 AM

BloomingRose~
Awwwwwww !
This is just precious !

The verse and the graphic are so delicately meshed.
Lovely - lovely - lovely !

Gotta print this one out and frame it !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2000-12-30 09:59 AM

So endearing a verse and laced with delightful phrases
A beautiful presentation
Liz

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2000-12-30 10:04 AM

Sweet, tender. Nice read.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-12-30 10:18 AM

This is sweet and comforting, Deb! Lovely poem!

Denise

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

5 posted 2000-12-30 10:19 PM

Marge~ Thank you sweet lady, your comments are much appreciated

Liz~ Thank you, so glad you like it

VAS~ Thanks, as always

Denise~ Glad you found comfort in reading this... thank you

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2000-12-30 10:57 PM

This is a sweet little gem, it flows so well and reads like a song!

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2000-12-31 05:50 PM

What a beautiful write to feast my eyes on tonight. Wonderfully penned and the graphic was great as well.

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