In Silent Touch...inspired by BC

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-01-08 11:38 PM

In Silent Touch

My room, dark and silent,
while I, resting, in wait
for the sounds of your breathing,
with thoughts of the next, replacing those
of the night before.

Words, poetic in feel,
touching my heart, tenderly,
soothing away all pain
those of yesterday,
and any of tomorrows.

Together, wrapped
into each others world,
we shall speak of forever,
in silent touch.

Eyes, reflecting the deep,
holding in truth, with every glance
knowing, the gentleness of you
touches my mind, leaving imprints
here and there, along my edges.

I quiver as you near me, every nerve
wanting to feel the electric flow
from your exploration, caresses
that bring forth the gentle sighs in me.

Lips, tasting the smooth inner peace,
seeking acceptance, smiling softly
finally "in know", that in silent touch,
every moment becomes forever,
when I'm with you.

~Wynter ...inspired by a yet to be posted poem by BC

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2001-01-09 09:16 AM

nicely done wynter..always nice when someone can inspire us..someone like BC..enjoyed hon

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Agust P
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since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

2 posted 2001-01-09 10:35 AM

beautiful painting this poem, I liked it, AP

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2001-01-09 10:48 AM

every moment becomes forever,
when I'm with you.

Absolutely beautiful... and so very true! *S*

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-01-09 12:40 PM

thank you ~V~, yes inspiration comes easy from his poems...

AP, glad you enjoyed.

thank you suthern, I believe it can be true...with the right person.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

5 posted 2001-01-09 04:51 PM

Eyes, reflecting the deep,
holding in truth, with every glance
knowing, the gentleness of you
touches my mind, leaving imprints
here and there, along my edges.

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This is poetry at it's best.
Very intense, yet laced with love.
Like it much!
Deb

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2001-01-09 07:17 PM

Evening Wynter,

I came, I read, you are magical with this writing. You did what you said, and were inspired by the writing of mine that you read. I'll do my best to post your inspiration for this writing of yours on Saturday, at the latest on Sunday. Thanks Wynter, this was very, very nice.

BC

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