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Just This Once
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Just This Once |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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i stand small against the blowing wind at the edge of a mighty expanse... the ocean speaks to me boldly-- yet it is you leaving whispers on my heart the salty air caresses my eyelids-- and it is you breathing sighs upon my skin the splash of tide teases my longing lips-- it is you i dream of kissing... dream the dream with me from far away where you are... tonite..only tonite, love close your eyes and feel the wet sand underfoot feel the wind embrace you listen to the ocean sing for the moon i'll slip my hand in yours and the night is ours though small we may stand at the ocean's bed the dream is as big as we make it create it together with me, love... come dream with me just this once... -dgvarner 1-8-01 "you got some kind of hold on me youre all wrapped up in mystery so wild so free so far from me youre all i want, my fantasy..." def lepard [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yet it is you leaving whispers on my heart the salty air caresses my eyelids-- and it is you breathing sighs upon my skin =========================== tonite..only tonite, love close your eyes and feel the wet sand underfoot feel the wind embrace you listen to the ocean sing for the moon i'll slip my hand in yours and the night is ours ==================== enchanting and beautiful DG ... sensual and seductive in its sincere longing.. very nice.... hold on to the dream ... its worth waiting for ... like your new signature too  jm No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ... and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Very beautiful ...I could picture standing at the ocean's edge hand in hand...Love all around...Dreaming...Good dg, I liked , much... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
How could he resist? Great writing, as always.  hugsTo love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ REALLY like this one bunches and bunches. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, I can be a big dreamer.... and my tonight just seems to be open.... and why stop at just once. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
jm..'enchanting'...wow! thank you so much for such a wonderful reply! good to hear from you awesome poet! i'll keep dreaming..we'll work on mr reality's dreaming a little...lol (you like that signature huh...lol def lepard fan??)LL..so glad you enjoyed..thank you! MAR..i dunno mar..he's a tough one.. lol as always, good to hear from you..MARGE..thank you for bunches! PARKER..ok mr big dreamer..dream me in already! ..and feel free NOT to stop at 'just once..'  hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I can hear the waves now! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
DG, this was beautifully written with much elegance. i felt as though i was floating as i read this. made me really feel at peace. i hope your "just once" comes true take care amy ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
IRISH..the waves are great arent they... AIM..thank you so much for such a wonderful reply! i'm glad you enjoyed! hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Loved it. < !signature-->"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 01-10-2001).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey EAGLE! thanks for reading me..glad you liked hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a remarkable trip into a romantic and warm dreamworld! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ETHOME..hey friend poet! so happy you stopped by..and glad you enjoyed the journey hugs, g |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAgh you make me dream of what once was tangable, now only memories. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ONE..glad you stopped in it seems you didnt enjoy the memories..or..the loss of what once was..? sorry about that  but i thank much for reading hugs, g "oh baby baby, its a wild world..its hard to get by just upon a smile..." cat stevens |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
once is all it takes sometimes...good piece |
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