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Among The Daffodils Of You
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Among The Daffodils Of You |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Among The Daffodils Of You ~*Marge Tindal*~  Tell me where your meadow starts so I may come to play among the daffodils of you set in soft array Take me to the edge of time in open space of you cavorting in the grasses greened by warmth of sunshine's hue Play me with enchanting notes of flutes upon the hill dancing 'cross the meadow of your graceful daffodils Among the daffodils of you set in soft array tell me where your meadow starts so I may come to play ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is so beautiful, I love this and the pic is divine. This is one of those poems that really bring a smile, one of your special poems. I love this one Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful imagery Marge ... and such lovely thoughts. I loved the flow within these glowing lines, nicely written my friend!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Where does my meadow start? Oh, Marge!! My meadow here is very large! Get off the beaten path until Your eyes see miles of daffodils It's plantin' time and there are rumors You're gonna LOVE to see my bloomers So come down, Marge. I'll do you proud Come see my fields and let's get plowed!! |
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Pearls_Of_Wisdom Member
since 2000-09-02
Posts 175 |
Wow. That was pretty awesome, if I do say so myself. You conveyed so much meaning with so few words. Great work, Marge! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Thank you for traipsing through my daffodils. Kit~ It's just a daffodil day ! Thank you, my friend. Balladeer~ You certainly tickle my fancy - and a few other places I can't mention but if getting me to view your bloomers is your sole intention ... I'M ON !  Rumor has it I've already seen 'em ... so let's not procrastinate. get those bloomers on (or off) I'll arrive at half past eight ... You supply the plow .. I promise not to be late ! PearlsOfWisdom~ Well, thank you. So nice to know you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, The meadow starts in the heart, reaching for the prairie of love. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, this is lovely, you knew I'd come in to be swept away...and enjoyed the sweep very much! Well done my friend... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JD~ That's a MARVELOUS response ! I love it and am sending big Hugs~ ! Karilea~ Yep ! *Heart-Hugs* to you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A lovely breath of spring...beautiful work Marge. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Thank you. It is another daffodilly day ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Playing, cavorting..ahhh..sounds like such fun... I liked this one much... ~LL~< !signature-->The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-10-2000).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
the meadow is there step forward and you are here flowers ... I await Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyLightning~ I'm glad you liked it. It is just such a bright little flower that spreads joy like the sunshine. InterLoper~ Tip-toeing to the edge of you Flowers soft surround The beauty of the meadow in joyous colors abound Thank you for your verse-atile reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well you know where my meadow starts the real question is how the heck do you get out once you are in. This was a wonderful little verse from you my sweet friend and in case you forgot, my meadow lies in the middle of the range just beyond the row of cactus that surround my heart. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ How DO you do it?! I love this, it's so pretty........ -SEA |
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Rowen Junior Member
since 2000-12-07
Posts 12 |
How beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Once I got inside your meadow - I sure wasn't worried about a few cacti pricks ! *Hugs* SEA~ Well, I started with an order of daffodil seeds from the Burpee catalog - and then ....... LOL ! Thank you, doll ! Rowen~ Why, thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Marge! Denise |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
All of your pieces are so beautiful, and they always put a smile on my face! Thank you for posting this. Have fun in the daffodils! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ *Holiday Hugs* LoveBug~ Thanks, gal. You're a sweetie. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Sheesh ka boobs, I think i'm going to have to go into writing about daffadeing-dils and plowing ballads hills... I've done forgot what this poem is about... It's 2:15 here on the west side and I'm wandering if ya alls going ta woik tomorrow... that's marrow... ahh-oh, I got to get out a here... somebody's gonna thank I'm talking about **n**. LOL you two... Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A wonderful presentation, Truly enjoyable and resonates the memories, of a time when my window looked over such a place, they were daylilies of orange left by a previous gardener. Gloom |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well I don't know whether I could let someone that writes so beautifully near my meadow or not......I just might end up being a helpless child of love never knowing any better....very beautiful Marge!! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
O' Margie-girl I'll skip with you through daffodil fields anyday! This is so light and joyful! Well written!~Take care, Melissa~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
come on then... |
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