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YES ma'am I am
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YES ma'am I am |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
She asked me if I'd like a drink? I said yes ma'am She spun around in her dress and said what do you think? I said YES ma'am We danced under the chandelier like a sailor and dame from 1945 The slow erotic trumpet sound held us close, I never felt so alive The phonograph player skipped but we kept on dancing In the window the pale moon climbed with our moments of romancing She whispered a kiss into my ear As her hands caressed, it was all so clear I knew this was that moment that the guys made me fear She evoked a new sensation that shed a timeless tear She sensed my fear and asked if I was OK? I said yes ma'am I am She began to smile saying you’re a virgin for the very last day I said YES ma'am I am |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi insect... You know....I can't believe this poem is on the second page......it is fantastic, and deserves it's spot in the sun, at the top!! Enjoyed this one totally!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ha ..good one insect..i must of missed this one the first time around..  nicely done~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hey babe its great having you back I have missed you...this is great!!!!!! Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules? |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Sunny1…Yes ma'am! Ha! Thanks for the lift sweet poet friend  Victoria…WOW! Another sweet poet I mean….. Yes ma'am! Ha! Thank you Victoria Paula Finn…YES ma'am I am…. happy to receive a reply from you always……Thank you Paula _______________________________________________ For Sunny, Victoria, Paula and SpitFire Sweet friends with passion and fire Your words sing to me and I much desire Your breath whispering love in my ear to my soul Without your touch I wouldn't feel whole I send kisses back and smiles for all I never feel alone when ever you call I peek in at you as shy as I am If you ask me I must say YES ma'am I am [This message has been edited by insect (edited 01-09-2001).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I,...very nice reading you. Left me smiling. Always. *Peace you. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Fire… YES ma'am! Thank you my flaming poet You will always give me a warm feeling whenever you throw a flame my way |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
So you were in a different kind of challenge I guess insect....lol Very funny write. James |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Insect~  you know, I love this......... very nice. -SEA |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I'm so glad your mother taught you to be so polite. YES SIR, you're quite a guy. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very cute and a bit naughty. Well, I'm 55 and from the old school, what can I say? But I can't help but smile inside and I loved the dance, too! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Haleyja…Thanks Glad to make you laugh! SEA…Thank you ma'am Nice to see your smiling face SEA! Inot2B…Thanks…..Umm! I hope she doesn't have access to Adult! VAS…Thank you Always happy to bring smiles! |
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