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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I believe in you In the love we both can share In our forever I believe in us No matter how long it takes To find all we are I believe in love Patience I promise to you One day at a time I believe we two Can take a chance together Faith will take us there Faith in who we are Faith we can share forever Faith will lift us up I believe in you Faith can move all our mountains I believe in us |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Very tenderly and convincingly written. I enjoyed your little mustard seed of faith~ 'Faith can move all our mountains'/i> ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You express your beliefs beautifully. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-09-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the way you wrote this Paula...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula love, always have faith, if it can move mountains it can make dreams come true. Always believe in yourself, and love and love will believe in you. This is as always a beautiful softly flowing and excellant write. Never do you fail to write such beautifully and poetically perfect pieces. And this is a wonderful piece from my sister phoenix. Take care love Mushy fly high fly free  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Yep, you have the faith! Good write! Deb |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Written with tenderness and love.. nicely done Paula...  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marge...it helps when you have something to believe in...and I do...thank you Poeminister...thank you so much James...Im very glad you like it Marsha...well a good friend helped me remember that without a little faith love gets lost...thank you darlin girl Blooming Rose...I do now yes thank you Victoria...tenderness and love was what inspired it to be...thank you |
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