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Rainbow Kisses |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Kiss me like a rainbow kisses the sky kissing softly and gently not a kaleidoscopic toy am I kiss me with true colors of the rainbow the warm passion of a sunset the brilliant passion of van Gogh stir my soul, my warm blood within blush me with your kiss stroke me like strings of a violin profess your love like the thunder in night kiss me like lightning beneath sheets of moonlight kiss me with desire that only you can kiss me with true colors our love will forever blend A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Very explicit instructions! I don't think he can pass up an invitation like this. [This message has been edited by inot2B (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
I loved the colours of your rainbow words *s Lady Ollyne [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (edited 01-08-2001).] |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Powerful, beautiful imagery and brilliant use of methaphor is whai I've observed from the is poem.....terrific job! Nathan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
sounds like a crayola moment! wow! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Both presention and poem is delightful! I love the theme you used to express the many colours of love. This is one of your best  Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Remember the tune "Kisses Sweeter Than Wine"...that surely applies to this piece. I hope you're all puckered up because this will surely ellicit lots of kisses ***S M O O C H*** jwesley |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria kissed by sunshine, shone through rain I hope to be kissed like this rainbow refrain Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love this. Beautiful write! Poeminister |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
inot2b...thank you so much..i hope not  lady olyne..thank you very much and i love your words too thank you Nathan...i am pleased to hear from you and i am happy you enjoyed.. kathleen..haa yes it does ..doesnt it haa..thanks for stopping by hon Melissa..thank you..this is one of those poems i enjoyed doing from beginning to end..glad you enjoyed it kethry..oh yes..quite a kiss it will be haa..thanks so much kethry nice to hear from you today poeminister..thank you and it is nice to hear from you poeminister.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds like a darn good plan, Vic..I hope it comes true. Loved it. Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Victoria ~~~ thank you for the rainbows that you give us! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
A wonderfully pretty write! Rainbow Kisses to you! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you sandra and sunny..my sweet friends..yes sandra sounds like a good plan haa and sunny thank you too for your sweet comment..HUGS nice to hear from both of you ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you for that wonderful kiss insect..a passionate kiss indeed ha..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
~kiss me with true colors of the rainbow the warm passion of a sunset the brilliant passion of van Gogh~ Victoria~ I Love the visual effect in this. Beautiful poetry! Deb |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Deb..i enjoyed writing this one...pleased you enjoyed.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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