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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-01-09 02:47 PM


Just when i think all is gone
a  whisper of you comes along
a thought, sweet and gentle
a smile adorns my face
i  guess my heart loves you
the thought of your embrace

Just when i think all is gone
you enter my mind like a song
maybe just sentimental
my heart starts to race
remembering your hue
my love for you can not erase

Just when i think all is gone
just like egg foo youg
though intercontinental
a blush upon my face
over an ocean of blue
my memory doth trace

Just when i think all is gone
a teardrop slips away like a sarong
though the feeling is mental
we entwined, a shoe lace
in love me and you
our memories still interlace

Just when i think all is gone
a bell within sings ding dong
just instrumental
thoughts of you doth grace
a pas de deux
memories arranged in a crystal vase

Just when i think all is gone
you come along..along again


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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  




[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-09-2001).]

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2001-01-09 04:28 PM


exactly how I feel today, ~V~....nice *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-01-09 05:04 PM


Yes its true thou sometimes those thoughts are bittersweet and blue...James
vandana
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3 posted 2001-01-09 05:17 PM


like this much
Victoria
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4 posted 2001-01-09 09:29 PM


thank you very much wynter..james and vandana
appreciate all of you taking time to read

                  ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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