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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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I am last not least I wonder if dreams come true I hear the beast in futures peace I see life's path that guides us through I want to sooth the lame man's cry Because I am last not least ~ I pretend to be the guiding light I feel the need to flee I touch the pain to feel the bite I worry you'll stray from me I cry when the Leafs don't win the cup Like they I am last not least ~ I understand I'm boring you some I say please tug my leash I dream of days many years to come I try to place yours above my piece I hope to be the last dog hung Because hey! I'm last not least ~~~ Had a feeling of 'De Ja Vu' while writing this. Did I write it or am I recalling something I once read? |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
No deja vu here for me Rex ... just a wonderfully refreshing and unique view from a writer I admire ... nicely done, I really enjoyed this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Rex, Well, if you wrote it before, you did it again, excellent write! Very, very well put together and I liked to prelude to the first line repeat. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mayhap just the introspection of many things thought over time...and may I say...quality overall?...yes of course I may... well done Rex! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks Kit ... Very kind of you to say that It means a lot to me I do so admire your work as well Kethry ... thankyou again for reading my scribles, you're kindness seems to shine here at passions Sunshine ... you know ... if we're feeling down, most times all we need is a breath of fresh air and a sprinkle of 'Sunshine' Thankyou |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Rex my friend, trust you to come up with something truly unique...well done Loved this very much Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, I agree you are never "least"...a unique twist on the phrase... *softsmiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou Tracie ... Your a good friend Wynter ... it's very nice of you to say that, thankyou |
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