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Lana
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since 2000-12-26
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0 posted 2001-01-08 09:22 AM


I scroll through your poetry
your lives and open windows
and shift around uncomfortably
and read of open doors.

Some control, some delete
lot of lovin’ going on here
some is real, some is sweet
the ones are blessed who are sincere.

Boy there’s lust and heat of all decorum
I wonder if it’s satisfied
oh Hey!   I’ll go to the Adult Forum
maybe there it won’t be denied!!


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Victoria
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1 posted 2001-01-08 12:34 PM


lana i visited adult today for the first time in a while..hope you enjoy all the forums in passions...  

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  






[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-08-2001).]

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