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Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

0 posted 2001-01-05 12:48 PM

I Was Just Wondering ! Lancelot {Bilal} © 2000

I was just wondering, if I could tell you
That my heart & soul've fallen for you

I was just wondering, if I could tell you
How much I really care for you

I was just wondering, if I could tell you
That you're all I've on my mind

I was just wondering, if I could tell you
Your behaviour towards me was rough

I was just wondering, if I could tell you
That we can be each others forever

I was just wondering, if I could tell you
That your each move means a lot to me

I was just wondering, if I could tell you
That can you love me back as I love you

I was just wondering, if I could tell you
That all my life I'll really love you

I was just wondering, if I could tell you
Would you take me as your man !!!!!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-01-05 05:07 AM

I hope you sent this poem to her because it asks some very important questions...very good I enjoyed the read...ethome

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-01-05 05:45 AM

well than...go and found out, ask her ...send her these wonderful poem, your love shining through your words.

Charisma

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

3 posted 2001-01-05 10:51 AM

Thank you very much Ethome and Charisma. i really appreciate your comments.
Bilal

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-01-05 10:53 AM

Sounds like a proposal...hope she accepts!

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

5 posted 2001-01-06 02:53 AM

Well Sunshine,
I hope it was a proposal but unfortunately it ain't that easy. Thanx for responding.
Bilal

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

6 posted 2001-01-06 02:45 PM

I was wondering if I could tell you,
that this piece is nice write..

I was wondering if I could tell you,
that your words truly shine bright.

I loved the flow and repetitiveness of this piece...take care!

Nathan

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-01-06 03:00 PM

Oh Bilal, this is such a beautiful sincere poem! Believe me, my dear soulbrother, you will find that girl of your dreams and she would love to take you as her man, and share a beautiful heart like yours forever. Thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

8 posted 2001-01-07 05:52 PM

Thanx a lot Nat Dogg, and Dear soulbrother Noah, for responding to my poem. I appreciate your comments.
Bilal

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-01-07 06:34 PM

With those beautiful words, surely she will listen.
Sandra

Bilal
Member

since 2000-12-13

Posts 66

10 posted 2001-01-08 12:55 PM

Thank you very much Catalinamoom. I hope she does.
Bilal

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