Open Poetry #11 |
I Was Just Wondering ! |
Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
I Was Just Wondering ! Lancelot {Bilal} © 2000 I was just wondering, if I could tell you That my heart & soul've fallen for you I was just wondering, if I could tell you How much I really care for you I was just wondering, if I could tell you That you're all I've on my mind I was just wondering, if I could tell you Your behaviour towards me was rough I was just wondering, if I could tell you That we can be each others forever I was just wondering, if I could tell you That your each move means a lot to me I was just wondering, if I could tell you That can you love me back as I love you I was just wondering, if I could tell you That all my life I'll really love you I was just wondering, if I could tell you Would you take me as your man !!!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I hope you sent this poem to her because it asks some very important questions...very good I enjoyed the read...ethome |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
well than...go and found out, ask her ...send her these wonderful poem, your love shining through your words. Charisma |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thank you very much Ethome and Charisma. i really appreciate your comments. Bilal |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sounds like a proposal...hope she accepts! |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Well Sunshine, I hope it was a proposal but unfortunately it ain't that easy. Thanx for responding. Bilal |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I was wondering if I could tell you, that this piece is nice write.. I was wondering if I could tell you, that your words truly shine bright. I loved the flow and repetitiveness of this piece...take care! Nathan |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Oh Bilal, this is such a beautiful sincere poem! Believe me, my dear soulbrother, you will find that girl of your dreams and she would love to take you as her man, and share a beautiful heart like yours forever. Thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thanx a lot Nat Dogg, and Dear soulbrother Noah, for responding to my poem. I appreciate your comments. Bilal |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
With those beautiful words, surely she will listen. Sandra |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thank you very much Catalinamoom. I hope she does. Bilal |
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