Open Poetry #11 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I am a sneezy, drippy mess I am not really at my best My nose is sore and I am sure I'll need more tissues from the store I eat my soup and drink my tea And sneeze again...oh, God bless me! Again I slept the day away I fear this cold is here to stay It's been so long since I could breathe Seems nothing that I try relieves My stuffy head, my ears and chest I'm just a sneezy, drippy mess. Well, now it's time I went to bed To rest my sneezy, drippy head. Perhaps tomorrow I can see My way to reading poetry! *sniff* Denise |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I hope you find yourself in the dreams of a very restful sleep my friend. I know it is enough to drive you batty when you can't sit at the keyboard without it getting all gooey'd up. This was a fun read but I am sorry that you are feeling under the weather. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Denise, I hope that I can be so cheerful about it the next time I'm there. Something I never tried to write about. Thanks for the chuckle. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Awwww ! Poor, poor baby. You rest and stay in out of the cold ! This was a really cute write - for one so miserable ... it's nice to know that your sense of humor isn't all sneezy ! If you were here at my place, you could just go out to the grove and pick your own fresh grapefruit and oranges and we'd squeeze you a big pitcher of juice. Take two *Hugs* ... *Hugs* and call me in the morning ! ~*Dr.Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Awww Denise...still prayin for your recovery! GET BETTER ya hear? Hugs coming and prayers coming your way. <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Just a note, Denise, to wish you a speedy recovery, and hope you're feeling better soon. Take care of yourself, and don't forget to eat a lot of chicken soup!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Chicken soup for the soul, chicken lips for your nose...delightfully woven piece even if inspired by your discomfort. At first I thought it was going to be a piece to the "I am" challenge...you put a smile on my face, but not for your discomfort, please know. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Passing Kleenexes, retrieving warm blankies, and a hot toddie on its way... |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Denise! What are you doing out of bed? You know that when you're sick you're supposed to lie down and wait for someone to bring you chicken soup, sudafed, and a box of tissues! Now lie down and get better! Hope you're back to normal so-o-o-o-on! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
You and me both Denise..i have had this for a week now..this runny nose..get better soon... HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks everyone! I am starting to feel better after a second trip to the doctor and a different prescription. I have been sick off and on since the middle of December. I hope my feeling better lasts this time! Thanks for the hugs, well wishes and prayers! Denise |
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