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It Didn't End As A Fairy Tale
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It Didn't End As A Fairy Tale |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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It Didn't End As A Fairy Tale < !signature-->So it didn't end as a fairy tale should Did you really imagine that it would? For it's a bubble you've been living in And ignoring the truth should be a sin If you block your ears and shut your eyes When you take a fall comes as no surprise What you thought of as something real Seems suddenly to have lost its appeal Do you really wonder why it had to all end You didn't think that his heart you'd mend For all you did was offer him some respite Your love wasn't seen as his golden light But don't you despair and be cast down Try to smile wipe away that teary frown There's a silver lining the sun will shine And you know soon that you'll be fine Pick yourself up wipe away all those tears Ignore your pain banish back those fears For now you need to move forward and let go These first steps are painful, they hurt so But each step forward is one step more And before you know you will soon soar Look to loves heaven and set yourself free And you will be blessed you wait and see Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"Look to loves heaven and set yourself free And you will be blessed you wail and see" yes...set yourself free to loves heaven  but dont ignore the pain...you must feel it for it to truly be understood..and then go on.. (((hugs))) "dee" "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Yes, you have to pick yourself up and keep going. Here's wishing fairytales and dreams could come true for you. Hugs, Deb |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, Note to self perhaps? You know this is fabulous, amazing,clever, shorter and inspirational. write on belong Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee love, thank you sweetie, I'm taking it one step at a time, because each step forward moves me on. I've done more than my share of crying love, and I'm not going back there. I'll learn, I'll breathe, I'll be, ME Take care love Bubbles  Debs love, thank you too love, one day I shall have the dream to hold. One day, 'I know it I' Take care Mushy Kethry love, most definitely note to self. I'll get there, if I have to crawl over broken glass, and I've lost all, I will get there. Because love, just because Love and thanks as always Slushy Kari love thanks, they are most definitely welcome. The three Phoenixes, we will arise. Love and smiles Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Who said you could look in my heart? You did write this just for me right? Well if you didnt you sure could have... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marsha love, note to myself as well. . . Just beautiful. . . beautiful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula love, not you too love, Oh what is wrong with us. Have I got a sign somewhere that says hey everyone, My names Marsha, I believe in dreams and miracles, prove me wrong. (I will not lose my dreams I will not.) Paula love take care, and we will rise, we will. Love Mushy Sven love, we will beat this, a new year and a new beginning right. Right. I'll smile and then when I get tired you can smile for me. Thank you love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh sweet one, the problem is certain men do see a sign on us saying we have a soft heart and feel they can use us to make them feel better. *sigh* dear one, I have been there myself and I can just say, BRAVO!!Keep your dreams alive and a man will come who will live your dreams with you and charish you as you deserve to be charished. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen love, it's true, but I will hold on, and then one day I'll be flying again. Thank you sweetie Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You've taken quite a step by reaching out to the hearts at passions here...and they have responded well... no one likes to see a fellow poet with an open and loving heart get hurt...when one does they rally behind that one as they have done for you my little nurse love...you are a real good girl. It doesn't take to much to figure that out when one reads the open thoughts in your poems... have a good day right away cause you deserve it.. your old poet pal ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
P T love, thank you so very very much, I'm working really hard dear heart honestly. Nothing convinces me that Passions is my ever loving home more than times like these. Well thank goodness for my family. And they are far easier to share time with than my sisters. I shall indeed rise again love I know I will. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Some you win and some you don't Stone walls do not a prison make Nor iron bars a cage Minds innocent and quiet take That for a hermitage If I have freedom in my love And in my s |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem reminded me of myself...I like it when someone seems to need me and I start having feelings for them but suddenly they don't need me any more and they are gone and I am hurting...after a while I get tired of hurting and determined to move on...ready for a repetition of the same it seems...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Marsha, you have peeked into a lot of hearts on this one, I am sure. You are inspirational even in sadness. Sandra |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
MArsha, you are the kind that always rises ...and you have that effect on others, too |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
James thank you love, I do agree, it does seem to be a cycle. But I shall just have to sort out a way for the cycly to be broken. Take care Mushy Sandra love, thank you so much love, your own work is truly wonderful. And you know I love your poems. We will be fine, sisters of the Phoenix are we. Take care love Mushy 'Deer love, thank you muchly, I'm sorry I didn't get back to you before. I forgot about this one. (I must have more blonde genes than I thought) Take care kid Mushy And while thy willing soul transpires At every pore with instant fire Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marsha, you are WOMAN and you will make it! We all fall at one time or another, but the more we get up the better we become!! I like your spunk. Hugs, ME |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
aw this is perrdy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ahem! *G* Be real careful about those blonde remarks, wouldja? *G* This is wonderful, Marsha! |
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