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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-01-07 08:48 PM



Hi,Guys,This is one one of old poems I've posted so far over here.Hope you all will like it.  


You know,
You are all I have
With me,
Your heart
belongs to my heart,
Everyday of my life,
I think of our love,
Iam lost ,
Dying Inside my heart
When you showed me
so much
That you are the one
for me,
Now I know,
Every word you say,
It Is true,
And your eyes gave me
An answer
That I already known
You All that I know,
Every night,
In my dreams,
I
see you smiling
At my face,
And I walked Into
Different places
I have been with you before,
Remembering
That I had such nice moment
With you,
realising,
You are that I care,
You are all that I know
For long time,

Well,This was hard for to write again....smiles
You still mine forever,


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 01-07-2001).]

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2001-01-07 10:51 PM


Well I am trying to remember the old one but all I can say is the new version is wonderfully spoken.  I am glad you reposted it in it's new format.
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-01-11 03:34 PM


"Remembering that I had such a nice moment with you."   Sometimes we only feel the sadness and I believe we need to remember the nice moments also...love is bittersweet..when I remember the nice moments it makes me yearn more for new ones...sometimes this is not possible...James
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