Open Poetry #11 |
You Are All That I know (I have change the words of this poem) (an Old poem) |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Hi,Guys,This is one one of old poems I've posted so far over here.Hope you all will like it. You know, You are all I have With me, Your heart belongs to my heart, Everyday of my life, I think of our love, Iam lost , Dying Inside my heart When you showed me so much That you are the one for me, Now I know, Every word you say, It Is true, And your eyes gave me An answer That I already known You All that I know, Every night, In my dreams, I see you smiling At my face, And I walked Into Different places I have been with you before, Remembering That I had such nice moment With you, realising, You are that I care, You are all that I know For long time, Well,This was hard for to write again....smiles You still mine forever, [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well I am trying to remember the old one but all I can say is the new version is wonderfully spoken. I am glad you reposted it in it's new format. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Remembering that I had such a nice moment with you." Sometimes we only feel the sadness and I believe we need to remember the nice moments also...love is bittersweet..when I remember the nice moments it makes me yearn more for new ones...sometimes this is not possible...James |
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