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ranita311
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since 2001-01-04
Posts 10


0 posted 2001-01-10 01:29 AM


MORE THEN A FRIEND
     I crossed the line with my friend.
No turning back now. Where will it end?

     What am I doing? Have I lost my mind?
How could I do this and get myself in such a bind.

     He belongs to someone else, cant you see..
your going to cause yourself alot of pain and
misery. I know this is true, i knew it from the
start. But sometimes you dont think about it.
You just follow your heart.

     It's been six months since our first kiss.
I'll never forget that moment of sweet heavenly
bliss. I love him deeply.. truly I do.
Whats going to happen? I haven't got a clue.

     I let myself get in too deep,
knowing this man wasn't mine to keep.
i let down my guard, and opened my heart, hoping
and praying we'd never have to part.

   When he's not with me
my mind starts to wander you see...
  
   Is he there holding her with his gentle touch?
Is she receiving his sweet soft kisses i love
so much?

   The thought of them together
is driving me insane.
when i see the two of them....
it's pure heartache and pain.

   As much as I love him and as great as he is..
I have decided I can't be the other woman any more.
WILL I LOOSE THE SPECIAL FRIENDSHIP THAT I LOVE
AND ADORE ??......

                           RANITA311


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Stan
Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120
Inland Empire Southern California
1 posted 2001-01-11 08:35 PM


Ah, Ranita,
The ambiguities and enigmas of life.
Can you be and not be at the same time?
Perhaps in one respect but not another.

I remember an old sign I saw once in a repair shop.

It said:  
You can have good top quality.
You can have good fast service.
You can have a good cheap price.
You can have any two but never all three.

That's life!  But look, you have a wonderful talent of writing!  And you have me for an admirer.  Stan



EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2001-01-12 12:00 PM


Ohh who knows, maybe they'll get in some big argument and break up. Then you can grab the rebound!!

LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR.

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