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Caring Angels Haiku |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Caring, Loving Hearts Voices of Angels on Wing Loving Hearts Will Sing Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
As this sings...how perfectly lovely |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You've said so much with so little...this is perfectly beautiful, your angel wings are brilliant in this~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this is beautiful! you have inspired me to perhaps try my own hand at a haiku. thank you! take care. ~amy~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is truly totally beautiful. Simply perfect. I really love this but you knew I was going to say that I know.  Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
singing to be heard voices rising together vigil another wonderful my friend. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Simplicity in verse, short and wonderful. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and their sweet symphony resonates throughout the land... |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh beautiful! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful.... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, every one... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I love this, beautiful. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful......as I hear the angels singing Charisma |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh I agree with everyone...this is BEAUTIFUL |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ this made me smile big  I really like the happy feel of this -SEA |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Eagle One, Charisma, KitKat, SEA...thank you all for reading and commenting... 'tis appreciated... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ So lovingly portrayed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you my Marge... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karilea, I'm always amazed how you can say so much in so few words.... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Balladeer, the eyes say it all with lovesome sighs few may realize thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
tremendous writing from the sunshine of the heart ever angelic Regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, I appreciate your 3600th post...thank you!... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, this is toooooooo sweet... I had to let you know I came by to read and that I just adored it... Coco |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well I am in the mood for some angels right now and you supplied them. Thank you. This was truely beautiful. Alot said in so few words which is the mark of a great Haiku. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, my daddy always said that angels surround babies and soft-spoken cowboys...he was right... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I just love angel themes and this was beautiful! This flowed so smoothly and dreamily - What a nice thought Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine in a desperate world hope is lifted up write on, with song Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Melybee, Kethry.....just came across these replies....thank you SO much.... |
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