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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-01-07 01:24 AM

You Are a Twist on I Am

You are the desire in me...
the love that I crave.

I wonder what it is that you see in me,
that has not been viewed by others.

I hear in each of your breaths,
a sigh of longing.

I see you, your hand in mine,
walking under moonlights veil, come dark.

I want what you want, only
it doesn't come easy for me.

You are the desire in me...
the love that I crave.

We pretend that there is a future,
when there is only now.

To feel tomorrow's pull, tugs at my heart
tonight, weeping each yesterdays end.

I touch the mirror of you,
each time I look into my own eyes.

I worry that you feel
you are my "escape".

I cry at that thought, wishing
you knew it not to be true.

You are the desire in me...
the love that I crave.

You understand that tomorrow
cannot be controlled.

You say you believe in me,
wishing the best for me,
even if it doesn't include you.

I dream that it would...

You try very hard, making time for me,
each second prolonged, mine wanting to savor.

To hope, is all
that I have left to hold onto.

You are the desire in me...
the love that I crave.

~Wynter

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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-01-07 01:55 AM

Well my twisted sister,
this is a brilliant write and I love what you've done with it.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-01-07 02:04 AM

Kethry...as you can see I am up way past my bedtime (almost 2 a.m. here) I have been wanting to write this all day...but was too busy trying to finish painting my thoughts on my walls again..and covering my tracks with carpeting on my stairs, gold leafing my archways...and various other mind numbing activities to get me through these days...but finally I had this quietness, except for the humming sounds of my brain at work... thank you for reading, and I am enjoying your words tonight before I retire...

~Wynter< !signature-->

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

3 posted 2001-01-07 02:28 AM

A lovely read Wynter
I felt like I wanted to be there with you as I was caught up in your thoughts
Well done

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-01-07 04:59 AM

Wynter~
This is quite a neat and unique twist.
Cleverly conceived.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-01-07 09:00 AM

You are the desire in me...
the love that I crave."

find this and you don't need anything else!!!!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-01-07 09:47 AM

Rex ...I wanted you to feel that way..it means it expressed my thoughts exactly...

thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-01-07 02:46 PM

~*Marge*~ hmm thanks..I am a bit twisted in mind today..

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-01-07 03:29 PM

I like this twister, beautifully written.

Poeminister

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-01-07 07:26 PM

Kathleen...I don't think I will ever find it again...

Poeminister- thank you..for the "beautiful"

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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10 posted 2004-04-19 04:20 AM

neat write

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