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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-05 07:35 PM

         Echo of a passion

  I have a passion
  It has an echo
  Hear it strongest
  When you are near
  Disturbs my sleep
  Makes me weak
  Arms that wait
  Thighs that ache
  You free my soul
  I'm out of control
  Feeling echoes
  Of lovers secrets
  That start with desire
  And end in fire

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

1 posted 2001-01-05 07:38 PM

Very nice! Loved each line.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-01-05 07:42 PM

Very nice, indeed...and UNDERSTOOD each line...echoes...a reverberation of our own call...this one runs deep for me, m'friend...

You continue to amaze me...

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

3 posted 2001-01-05 07:44 PM

nicely spokwn

Breathe~
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 315
Washington...

4 posted 2001-01-05 07:44 PM

"Oooooh"...

Down right steamy in here!

Nice flow and I loved the ending...

I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

5 posted 2001-01-05 07:57 PM

"start with desire
and end with fire"

awesome!!! this one's HOT!

what a great longing write... !!
.... it's good when you don't worry about getting burned... i'm concerned about that myself sometimes... *sigh*.... but i say, write your heart because that's the power of writing... and this is a powerful write... good work.

welcome to Passions.... it's a hot place! keep your fire extinguisher handy! rofl

[This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 01-05-2001).]

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

6 posted 2001-01-06 06:41 AM

OH gees how did I miss this one. I loved it lady. It was short but there was a lne in it that got me going.(well more than one)
Love and light,
Richard

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

7 posted 2001-01-06 07:00 AM

beutiful peom

"Feeling echoes
  Of lovers secrets
  That start with desire
  And end in fire"

I liked this one, thanks AP

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-01-06 07:13 AM

HOT STUFF! that echo is coming back strong and clear.....and there's a fire burning there.... good write!

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

9 posted 2001-01-06 05:09 PM

Well, I love the way you echo your passion. I think I'd love to hear more of those echo's ..... for sure.

Parker

spiked
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

10 posted 2001-01-07 12:36 PM

I long to hear echos. Wonderful write.
Rich

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

11 posted 2001-01-07 01:54 PM

thank you ....I'm glad you all liked this .....and i can hear your echoes

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

12 posted 2001-01-07 03:53 PM

With this you speak of something we all feel and long to feel again. Something we wish to remember or make memories of.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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13 posted 2004-04-19 04:21 AM

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