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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-01-07 01:14 AM

Whirlwind of the heart
Dancing devilish torment
Dance this dance alone

Quiet One
Junior Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 46
Shhhhh

1 posted 2001-01-07 01:20 AM

Well said
and all in a Haiku

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-01-07 01:40 AM

well, at least you are dancing...*soft smiles*

~Wynter...and I do love haiku's...maybe I should do a few...and cut down on my wordiness...

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-01-07 05:09 AM

Paula~
Nicely executed Senryu.
This style becomes you, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-01-07 05:14 AM

Very well done Paula...I should try these but it's hard to compete with you pros...oh well back to love songs I guess...I can relate to what Wynter says!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

5 posted 2001-01-07 05:20 AM

Paula love, this is beautiful love it really is. Wonderful piece love
Take care
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2001-01-08 03:23 AM

QuietOne...thank you

nakdthoughts...dancing alone isnt much fun...come on try...I didnt think I could do this either

Marge...thank you I am finding I truly enjoy seeking few enough words to say how I feel

ethome...go on with you sweet poet man...you say more in just a word than most do in a hundred...so try...XXXtimes that word LOL

Marsha...what a gift you are...thank you

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-01-08 06:58 AM

Wonderful Senryu Paula! Amazing how you packed such visual and feeling into these few words, very well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

8 posted 2001-01-09 02:27 AM

Very good, if I may say so.

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