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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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0 posted 2001-01-07 05:08 AM


The happy thoughts you choose
are things we've learned from you
the special ordinary times
that everyone reads of you.

You'll love again although it may be
you lost your way chasing moonbeams
but as crazy as it may seem
you'll find yourself another dream.

The amourous words you use
the loving care that's you
you need to know we love you so
and feel so near to you.

I read your mind from midnight hours
your thoughts in lines of love.
It's just to hear from you
the searching hearts you move
that makes you our love.

You'll love again although it may be
you lost your way chasing moonbeams
but as crazy as it may seem
you'll find yourself another dream....
our sweet English love!    

© Copyright 2001 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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1 posted 2001-01-07 05:28 AM


P T love, without doubt you are the utter utter best, this is truly heart liftingly wonderful. Do I like this, is snow white? Thank you love, you truly are wonderful. A big hug and a kiss, or several actually. Love and stuff
                 Mushy
                  xxx


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



tracie66
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Australia
2 posted 2001-01-07 05:55 AM


Ethome~
Beautiful and thoughtful, you are a treasure
~HUGS~ to you and ~HUGS~ to sweet MM
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-01-07 07:30 AM


Only someone who is true in his heart and gentle in his soul would pick up pen to make another whole...as have you, Sir Ethome, as have you...
ethome
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4 posted 2001-01-07 11:43 AM


Thanks Mushy I'm glad you liked it and I hope to hear that things are going better.

Thanks Tracie I thank you for the kind words...ethome

ethome
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5 posted 2001-01-08 06:16 AM


Thanks Sunshine for the vote of confidence I appreciate your thoughts ....ethome
Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2001-01-08 06:31 AM


A beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady Ethome ... tender and encouraging words to soothe the soul, lovely!  

Best wishes and hugs to you both!
/Kit

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-01-08 08:23 AM


You'll love again although it may be
you lost your way chasing moonbeams
but as crazy as it may seem
you'll find yourself another dream.
================
E-babes...sorry to miss this one yesterday..
this forum is a moving way too fast theses days...
anyway this is so typically sweet and cool of you and by Marsha's reply  it seems to have done the trick.
Kindhearted gesture from you ...which comes as no surprise since you are Van-tastic  
jm

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
8 posted 2001-01-08 08:31 AM


Actually Marsha only untrodden snow is white, trampled snow is sort of a slushy grey, are you slushy grey?

Huggle Bunny you gotta know how much I love this. *HuGS*
Kethry



Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.


Startime
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9 posted 2001-01-08 08:34 AM


Oh, dear man, only you would come and bring music into a hurting heart like this. *sigh* you are all that love should be. Wonderful, my friend. Much love and hugs(I'll throw in a kiss too) from me to you.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2001-01-08 08:35 AM


(sigh) Oh, so very upliting and beautiful! Oh, I know Marsha loved, or will love this beautiful poem for her! She deserves to be loved, just like everyone else here! And she will find it! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha
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11 posted 2001-01-08 02:58 PM


P T love, this is way too wonderful to languish anywhere else. It should shine at the top of the first page. Kethry love, I'm as pure as the driven snow....... but I might have drifted a bit. boom boom  
And yes I have this pinned up, several copies actually, because any poetry around here does tend to go walkies. (Those docs you can't trust them an inch! If that)
Take care love
                  Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
12 posted 2001-01-08 08:17 PM


ethome..this is so sweet..and from the heart...marsha is such a wonderful person--that someone would toy with her good heart makes me angry..    youre a very awesome friend for writing this one for her!  

hugs, to you AND bubbles! g


"there is no 'best' in a world of individuals"
-unknown


Martie
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13 posted 2001-01-08 10:27 PM


ethome...to brighten one heart...see what happens?  You have brightened many...including mine.
Paula Finn
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missouri
14 posted 2001-01-08 11:11 PM


This is so sweet of you..and Marsha deserves your sweet words for all the love she ahs shared with us...

Life's a game...but who says you have to follow the rules?



Lady Lightning
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
15 posted 2001-01-09 02:19 AM


How sweet of you ..Can't think of anyone at the moment who needed this more than our Sweet Mushy... You made me smile when reading this, just knowing what it did for her..Thank you E for making her smile.. Hugs.. ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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