Open Poetry #11 |
Unity |
OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
For Judy, who makes every day precious. Unity. We have no time for sorrow, Between us, you and I, No tireless soul searching, No reason to ask why, We fit together hand in glove, A telepathic "know", That mutual exceptance, Just moves us with the flow, We count our blessings one by one, And thank our lucky stars, There is no greater happiness, No deeper love than ours, No need for insecurities, In strength we stand together, No grain of doubt, in circumstance, We live, in love, forever. |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Lovely poem.Judy will love it as well,I'm sure. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Olias this is a beautiful poem of love and devotion and you are a real lucky guy to have someone so dear to you to share your heart with...ethome |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Splendid work, Olias. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Michael |
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Shelby Olivia Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25 |
OLIAS, Judy is a very, very lucky girl. Thank you! |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
"Sound out the galleons..." In That QuietKnowing Unspoken Trust ForbearanceTenderTouch You Define Love In The Giving "Appointed close factors..." |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
T.A. Thanks for your response I hope she likes it. ETHOME Your words are very kind and I feel very lucky every day. Thank you. MICHAEL I'm glad you liked it, its from my heart and means so much. SHELBY OLIVIA I'm a very very lucky man Thanks for your response DREAMSEEKER You speak more truth in seven lines than I in four score. Thanks for your response. Regards and thank you too everyone Olias |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OLIAS....this left me downright envious...a beautiful portrayal of perfect trust...well done, m'friend. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eloquent, honest, beautiful and simply put...stunning. Your love shows in ever line and the fact that not only do you have a love and recognize it but you cherish it enough to weave it into poetry...beautiful work Olias~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Serenity, They say there is someone for everyone, I had to travel 5ooo miles to find the love of my life, but now I have I'm not ever going to lose her. Thank you for your kind response. Butterflies, Thank you for your response, I'm overwhelmed by your words, and I'm happy you enjoyed it. I can't imagine my life without Judy. Regards to you both and take care, poet friends, Olias. |
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