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it does me no good to cry.........................................
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it does me no good to cry......................................... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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It does me no good to cry tears well eyes shine I would let it fall but they refuse no time no way no how not today just as I feel the bite the quick sting of tears then a string of resolve nips my back stand straighter take the flack but if oh if I could cry just today would come to play rainbows in my eyes in the crystalline guise of tears mesmerized and I would then smile at the fact of me the lack of me walking the eggshell walk in performance of the silent talk for I shall always know that in my tears I see only in rainbow Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Excellent writing. *L* Sy |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I love this Sunshine especially the lines in the crystalline guise of tears mesmerized very envious, setting fire to my keyboard now!! Regards, Olias |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this one very much, Sunshine... it speaks of strength. *S* |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Beautiful piece,Sunshine,highly poignant and moving. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, resounding applause, and cheers from me. Now come out onto center stage and take your curtsy, and smile. Brilliant work Kari love Take care Majestic Marsha   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
That rainbow would be you. . . excellent my friend. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the way you wrote this...made me think about times when I could not cry...I wanted to but I couldn't...and I would be thinking "why can't I cry". But soon enough the tears would flow and they always help to soothe the soul...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Some tears arent worth crying Sunshine...but how do you know which ones? This is superb |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, you know what caught me the most in your poem... "For I shall always know that in my tears I only see rainbow" Superb write Sunshine... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Great, inspirational piece. Very special. Sandra |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is superb! My how you've grown here, my friend. It's rather exciting to watch!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy...you shall forever bring to me one magnificent word...thank you Olias, the keyboard is safe now, correct?...thank you Suthern...strength, my lady, lies in you...my southern thanks... Tony...poignant is such a huge word.... thank you... Marsha, center? no...think not... but your star is rising... Sven, rainbows are that when seen from another's eyes...thank you... James...crying...please don't cry...when there is so much more to live for, but if they may, then I shall hope they sooth your spirit.... Paula...tears have been shed, yes, and sometimes we shall never know if they are shed for us or them, ...but living goes on... Coco...rainbows live! I know one in particular, and she is remarkable.... Cat...you have been an inspiration...we will survive...you know this in your heart... Sharon...growth...may be...may be not...all perspective, don't you think? But I revel in your kindness...and your belief... thank you all.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh,this was perfect! I found it to be so well written and I'm sure many can relate. Thanks Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you so much, Saunni...relating is the whole experience, no? Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Our hearts seems to be laying in familiar paths of late...your poetry is playing every cord of my heart...this is so tender and soft...filled with the message that is etched within my own life...the need for that cleansing is so deep at times...but the promise to keep them in is stronger. Exquisite weaving from your heart to mine~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
BDC, lift your wings, little one...it is most tender when sisters of the heart hear another...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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