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Just Beyond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Just Beyond The mind is quick the pace is slow And of the mixture I don't know? Hell and heaven rule each day Hold my hand and let us pray. Beyond the immurement let us lure Beyond the byways and contour. Beyond the wonder of the dream Even beyond creations scheme. Hold my hand and let us pray Hell and heaven rule each day. Indulge the wile and drink the mist Pucker your lips and feel the kiss. Stand within the ego's fly Kick the dragon in the eye. Grab the pendulum change the rhyme Swing upon the edge of time. And if you can't reset the sail Then surely you remain in jail. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sy* Your words float so elegantly across the page...like soft satin billowing in a breeze, Excellent weaving dear poet~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"And if you can't reset the sail Then surely you remain in jail." Loved those last two lines best. Beautifully written altogether. Enjoyed much. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
love the rhythm, flow and flavor of this you've introduced a new word to me as well...immure quite a weaving |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Beyond the immurement let us lure Beyond the byways and contour. Beyond the wonder of the dream Even beyond creations scheme. Hold my hand and let us pray Hell and heaven rule each day. Indulge the wile and drink the mist Pucker your lips and feel the kiss. Stand within the ego's fly Kick the dragon in the eye. Grab the pendulum change the rhyme Swing upon the edge of time. And if you can't reset the sail Then surely you remain in jail. ================= Oh Sy baby ... ya ring me bells and ching me chimes with this melodic beauty... my goodness your verbiage and cadence in this is so PERFECT..and so way cool..... another set of matched poetic COOL from you today  later-wind in me sails-gator *winkiewinkie* me |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
great writing here... -Tier |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Stand within the eagle's fly Kick the dragon in the eye Grab the pendulum change the rhyme Swing upon the edge of time." Seymour I love how you write with such quality without making your compositions too complicated......ethome |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
unfurling sail, setting course... skimming 'cross waters by pure whispered force... always a keeper... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all you wonderful people above, I thank you much. Don't have any time catching a plane to New York for the holidays. See you all in a few days. Love you all. Sy |
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