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Our Lock and Key
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Our Lock and Key |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
The wave crashed against the rock, I hold the key, you hold the lock. Tightly held in your embrace, You undress my silk and lace. Our bodies covered by gentle wave, You're the one I desperately crave. This is what we've waited for, Your love, I truly adore. Lying underneath the pier, Whispering softly, your love sincere. Upon the beach, love feels so right, Making love through endless night. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hey this is so sensual and i don't think it's too taboo for open...nice job |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
Thank you glad you liked it. I don't think it is too taboo either.  Have a wonderful day. I will be looking for more poems to read. There are a ton o them here. I can't believe how cool this site it. Kelly |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Good work.Too light for the porn section,if there was one. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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LilPeanut Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 26Pennsylvania, USA |
Tony, Thank you May you have a beautiful week. Kelly |
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