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Open Poetry #11

Sta bilty....

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-11-24 11:27 PM

every one br eaks

     just
     look
over  pieces of hate
and struggle  to relate
a n d  I do
i have no other ch/oice

we are left with no other choic e

everyone's suddenly late]
when they should be strong
revolution swallowed wrong

(and thats what we're left LivIng On.....)

its whats going on  its where this is coming from

distortion in your sleep
st ability  when your weak

and oceans

and oceans

of red tape to connect

everything  and everyone...

no longer afraid of the dark or midday shadows nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2000-11-25 02:30 AM

Jackal
Sending you some

RED TAPE

connect

Write on
Kethry

Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2000-11-25 03:55 AM

i enjoyed this read.
i thought the format
was as well done as
the poem.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-11-25 08:16 AM

Nice to see you again, Jackal! I like this format too! Very well done!

Denise

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