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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-01-05 04:57 PM



~Sweet Music~

Sweet music come to me
fill this empty cup
lift me up
on wings of peace
lets slowly drift with the wind
till we find our secret place
where the sound of music
and sweet love songs
make us feel as one




BloomingRose



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Agust P
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1 posted 2001-01-05 06:07 PM


beutiful, I love this poem, few words saying so much, thanks to you AP
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2 posted 2001-01-06 01:11 AM


BloomingRose~
There you go again with that soft touch.
Lovely, lady.
~*Marge*~


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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2001-01-06 01:27 AM


So once again she lifts her wings to the winds of passion and creates a wonderful vision worthy of many songs.  Beautiful my friend in all areas.  You know I loved the cup that format as I love the picture poems so much but the words in this one spoke volumes and without distraction.
tracie66
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4 posted 2001-01-06 02:11 AM


~Sweet Music~
Sweet music come to me
fill this empty cup
lift me up
on wings of peace
lets slowly drift with the wind
till we find our secret place
where the sound of music
and sweet love songs
make us feel as one

BloomingRose

BR~
This my friend is simply devine, great write
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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