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Open Poetry #11

Dreams

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-05 02:26 PM

meandering mists
dreams...as clouds in my coffee
coloring my soul

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2001-01-05 02:37 PM

Soft and gentle words to explain dreams but as for me, I need to lay off the caffeine just before bedtime or I will have none. Bob <><

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

2 posted 2001-01-05 07:24 PM

thanks ...smiles well it is the way that cream could and billows in slow motion that brought me to write it as a dream.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

3 posted 2001-01-05 07:44 PM

I admire the poet most, who can say so much with so little word. I really like this one.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Breathe~
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 315
Washington...

4 posted 2001-01-05 07:46 PM

Lovely Haiku...

I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-01-05 07:58 PM

I love it. Wonderful analogy and image.

Poeminister

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