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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-01-05 12:09 PM


Life In Chocolates
~~~
Dressed in delightful flavor
maybe today,
I'll be chosen

Wounded in the back,
stuffed back in the box
fool,
did you really think so?

Feeling nuts,
about to burst
out of this chocolate covered mess

That's life,
you never know what it holds


BloomingRose



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-01-05 01:49 PM


BloomingChocolateGal~
Well, this one's got Whitman's Sampler written all over it !
(I'd give you a smiley face - but I'm tired of those little 'Santa' caps)

Just love this one.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-01-05 04:03 PM


Me and Forrest Gump agree with you 100% on this write. Excellent!
write on
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
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Palm Bay, Florida
3 posted 2001-01-05 04:04 PM


Very cute. Enjoyed the read.


With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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4 posted 2001-01-05 07:56 PM


When it comes to "Passions," I never know what I'm gonna get?  Glad I tasted this one... Nuts and chews are my favorite. (Hint) I do like a poem that's a little nutty and that I can chew on for awhile I suppose.  Love Ya,  Bob <><
Breathe~
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 315
Washington...
5 posted 2001-01-05 08:02 PM


The title reached and pulled me in...against my will..mind you...*L*

LOVE chocolate!! and loved this poem...!

"Wounded in the back,
stuffed back in the box
fool,
did you really think so?"  *LOL*

I am SO guilty of this...*shamed*

Thank you for making me laugh...



I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan

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