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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-01-05 12:31 PM

          “LOVE ME NOT FOREVER”

                                  by
                              Bill Charles
                                 ~~~~

Love me not forever, but please love me now if you do,
        as I have found many different ways,
                to express my love for you…
But my heart has been crying, maybe yours is like mine,
        and if it’s true, perhaps two could become,
                one again sometime…

Two becoming one, what a tender loving thought,
        I wonder if you’re up to it,
                or is it possibly all for naught…
It’s not hard to do, we were there once before,
        but then somehow,
                there was a closing of the door…

It slammed shut in both faces, but feelings still reside,
        deep within two hearts,
                with emotions that never did die…
The kindling is still there in mine, what about yours,
        does it still beat rapidly,
                remembering all its memoirs?

Wouldn’t it be aspiring, to melt two hearts together,
        even think as one,
                and making it better?
But you know the old saying, it’s very profound,
        “it takes two to tango,
                on this crazy merry-go-round”…
                      ~~~~

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (edited 01-05-2001).]

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

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Blue Heaven

1 posted 2001-01-05 12:40 PM

A light air to a very heavy subject. Well done Bill.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-01-05 04:17 PM

Wouldn’t it be aspiring, to melt two hearts together,
        even think as one,
                and making it better?
But you know the old saying, it’s very profound,
        “it takes two to tango,
                on this crazy merry-go-round”…
                      ~~~~

enjoyed it Bill...a little different for you *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-01-05 04:43 PM

Two souls made one
your words do seek
Two hearts to beat
one pattern clear
Two souls as one
the dream you speak

*sigh* oh yes, this is so very beautiful. How could she posibly resist. Much love and hugs to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2001-01-05 04:52 PM

Enjoyable and romantic
The perfect combination
Well done!
Liz

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-01-05 05:01 PM

i was looking at a merry go round today..a pic of me and my grandchildren..thats the only merry go round i want to be on haa..nicely written bill

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

6 posted 2001-01-05 05:33 PM

love it....yeah....truly do.

((hugs))
Charisma

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2001-01-05 06:42 PM

"Round and round and round she goes...where she stops..."... That's certainly an apt slice of love, isn't it? You've said it well, my friend... Nice job here..

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-01-05 06:46 PM

Please let my craziest dream come true!

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2001-01-05 08:46 PM

Evening Prometheus,

I hadn't thought of looking at it as you have mentioned, but yes, light air to heavy. It does make sense to me, and I do agree. Thank you for the help in looking at this writing a little different.

Evening nakdthoughts,

Nice to see you, and always welcome your considerate replies. Thanks for coming by once again, and hope your day has been well.

Evening Startime,

I do thank you for your generous and warm reply to this writing I have done. To perhaps touch someone, with something that I have written is one of the main reasons I write. A hug to you from I, and hope that your coming days are full of sunshine.

Evening Elizabeth,

Hi Liz, nice to see you. Glad that you liked this writing, and I thank you for the kind reply.

Poet deVine

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10 posted 2001-01-05 11:38 PM

AH!!! You are so right, this is wonderful. I'm putting it in my library and would love to include it in the Valentine issue of DP. Thanks!!!

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2001-01-05 11:55 PM

Well done romantic piece bill...

jwesley

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2001-01-06 02:09 AM

Good morning Victoria,

Well, that type of merry-go-round with grandchildren is the only one there should be. But as you know, there are others. Thanks once again for coming by.

Good morning Charisma,

Glad that you loved it, and glad that you came by, appreciate it.

Good morning Nan,

"Where she doth stoppage, who knowith?" Nice to see you Nan, and yes, you are correct. Thanks for the gracious reply, and it's nice seeing your words.

Good morning ethome,

"May your craziest dream come true"! Thanks for stopping at my place.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

13 posted 2001-01-06 02:13 AM

Bill~
Wonderful write, well done
Loved this one
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

14 posted 2001-01-06 02:27 AM

Good morning Poet deVine,

Nice to see you again, and thanks for taking the time to come by. It's very special to me when someone writes and says they are putting one of my writings in their library. Thank you for that.

And Yes, please include it in the Valentine issue of DP. Btw, there are more a coming, I'll let you know.

Good morning jwesley,

Thank you jwesley, for the kind reply, and for coming by my humble place. A'hhh, I love to do the romantic ones!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

15 posted 2001-01-06 02:31 AM

Good morning tracie66,

I was repling to some of the replies, and when I was done, I saw another reply which was yours. Thank you for your kind words, and glad that you loved it. Nice to see you.

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