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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
In the land of milk & honey yes, the home of the "free" I pull "the card" on you you pull "the card" on me while factions rise up everywhere but we're too blind to see we stand upon a sinking ship & die for our beliefs -Tier{Robin} |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Where there is hope and desire in the hearts there is the chance of staying afloat. Wonderful little verse from you with much said and done so powerfully at that. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Can I ditto Mark? *S* Well done! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Tier, I particularly like "I pull the card on you you pull the card on me." Well said in short verse too. IWIHWT. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Mark, Suthern, & Kethry, Thank you for commenting. I thought this poem wouldn't go over to well, (laughing), but that's ok. I wrote it this morning listening to the news. Needless to say that it was beginning to bug me... *smiles* -Tier{Robin} |
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