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Waterfalls.....haiku
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Waterfalls.....haiku |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Waterfalls whispering of trees synchronized with falling tears meeting waterfalls Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
three lines and you have brought forth a different view of waterfalls from mine--i always think of waterfalls as angry beings and the rapids as their way to vent their anger.... nice haiku..i do love to read how others feel about things  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Kaile: thank you for your reply......waterfalls can being your way....but if you take a good look...than you will see the beauty behind that anger face. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
whispering of trees synchronized with falling tears meeting waterfalls beautiful...just beautiful. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
ohh very beautiful once again!!!! I do enjoy your perspectives! A very nice write..love, Koko Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Captivating! Well done! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Charisma, this is beautiful, thank you!!! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful graphic and beautiful poem and a fantastic poet!!!! Nathan |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Charisma--I like this muchly. Very nicely done. Poeminister |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Kathleen: thank you for your kind reply, so glad that you like it. Nate: thank you......you make me *blush*  nice to see you around again. poeminister: I am very glad that you like this one.........thank you for your kind words |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 gorgeous! |
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