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I Am.....you know the challenge
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I Am.....you know the challenge |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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I Am I am necessary, I am always around I wonder how you can abuse my ground I hear the screw of Mother Earth I see the pain when she got hurt I want that you take care as her guard I am Mother Earth's beating heart I pretend that you like to have a future I feel your love for wonderful nature I touched the sky for cleaner air I worry because we need air to share I cry when crap have taken her part I am Mother Earth's beating heart I understand the progress of life I say its worth for you to strife I dream of nature clean and pure I try to give your world a future I hope that you'll give me that award I am Mother Earth's beating heart Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Charisma...I like the level you took this to---was different--and I LOVE different. Great job with this...had a mystical feel to it that touched me. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done C and full of such concerned expressions about our mother earth. I share your heart in this one and am glad you've mentioned it again for all...I t can't be mentioned enough....ethome |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes very different, and I can see her watching over all..but needing us to watch over her beating heart...thank you Charisma..huggzz ~Wyntet "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i like who you became charisma..not yourself but mother earth..great job..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, are you trying to take over Mother Earth's job. (I'll have to talk to the Union about you)*s* great job on this challenge, very, very well met. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
okay so you knew when you penned this one that it would go in my library didn't you? You know this is a subject of mine that is as passionate as love itself to me. Wonderfully written my friend and I thank you for sharing this passion with us. It is so important that we not neglect this gift we have been given to enjoy but so many of us do. I commend you highly. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
serenity: I am glad that you love the different of this one...and to feel the mystic within. ethome: yeah I agree with you, its so necesarry to take care of our world, thank you for sharing your heart with me. wynter: you got that girl....her beating heart is ours too. Victoria: thank you my dear, you all know me well through my poetry...so I let Mother Earth inspire me with this one. Kethry: my friend, if you wanna talk about me for the good, than I appreciate that highly....a good plea for our nature isn't wasted time right. Mark: offcourse I knew that...that is why I wrote it for, that you would save it in your library.... ....I am so honoured that you think that this is a keeper....thank you for your highly comment my friend...(glad you can't see me blushing now) |
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