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I Am.. Serenitys Challenge |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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I am a woman soft and gentle within depths of my soul I wonder ..will i be lonesome for someone to stroll I hear lonely whispers in the wind of the night I see shadows hiding behind the veil of moonlight I want to be a drummer..not beneath a drummers roll I am a woman soft and gentle within depths of my soul I pretend i do not hurt when my heart is teased I feel invisible within the whispers of the breeze I touch with my heart..pain and hurt i have tasted I worry that my love and passion will be wasted I cry that someday age and time will take its toll I am a woman soft and gentle within depths of my soul I understand that love must flow freely like the tides I say let the waves of my feelings be my guide I dream that one day someone will totally love me I try to have the strength and courage if needed to plea I hope someday i find a peace within and feel whole I am a woman soft and gentle within depths of my soul < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Victoria, You have my heartfelt love and understanding. Truth is everything, and that is so evident here. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful piece with great words of wisdom. You met the challenge well! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I see shadows hiding behind the veil of moonlight I want to be a drummer not beneath a drummers roll I feel invisible within the whispers of the breeze ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Victoria, I am touched to have read this one you write... The above quotes I highlight struck me like a lightening bolt... Your intensity of penned emotions here is absolutely breathtaking... Thank you so much for this most appreciated read... Hugs2u |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Reminds me of, "I am Woman hear me roar!!!" Written from the depth of a feminine soul expressing your virtues of womanhood. I love the strength of your words in this poem. Great job meeting the challenge! Bob <>< |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Beautiful write Victoria. Well done. Rich |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
jd..thank you..and im sure a man can relate to this as well..HUGS lovebug..Thank you it was my favorite challenge  coco..thank you so much..for those warm comments bob..thank you bob..yes helen reddy..saw her in person sing that..i am woman..she was great..about twenty years ago..ha.. rich..thank you so much for peeking in ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*Clapping with delight* this is wonderful and perfect in its presentation. I loved it. BRAVO!!!Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh how special this is, just like you are. Beautiful and full of longing and hope. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, you are..and it shows in this work presented so well, ~V~ ~Softsmiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you startime...nice of you to clap ha appreciate your comments HUGS sandra..thank you so much..love hearing from you hon..HUGS wynter..i like this challenge..it rang a bell haa..glad you enjoyed My good friend HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, something else that rings a bell I'll add it to my list Seriously though it's a beautiful challenge and you met it so well. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I want to be a drummer..not beneath a drummers roll I want that line!!!! How much? lol...god do I wish I'd written that one...the whole thing is so excellent and so YOU--but that line? Love it more than a little bit. Hugs and thanks for this one--gotta go put on some AC/DC now. lol |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Such honesty in your words... not afraid to share you inner most thoughts and feelings. Good write. Deb |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
kethry..thank you for peeking in..i am pleased you enjoyed serenity..thank you...i am happy you enjoyed too and thank you for all your comments deb..yes writing is easy when you can be honest with yourself especially..thank you deb for visiting today ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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