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Communication |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Communication© Karen Torbiak 2000 Eyes lock across the room at first shy then returned a message sent, received, he takes the prise earned A smile reaches eyes acceptance in a glance a look now understood, he leads her in the dance Arms embrace holding close she breathes his essense in sighing softly she melts for both of them will win A gentle kiss on lips that sends a signal clear, she moans from deep within, breathes a yes in his ear She has a thought most strange of communication neanderthal with its harmful deprivation Times have changed for the good as man and woman know with gentle look and touch love for each other show Sighing with utmost joy she returns to sweet touch as heart to heart they dance not needing to say much Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes words just aren't necessary! Beautiful, Karen! Denise |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love is communication from the heart....love this beautiful penned piece.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful, Startime...and so true. Words are not the only form of communication...and often not the best. Spendid writing, as always.....  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
dsnyder *sigh* so very true. When eyes meet and sparks fly there is no need for words. Thank you so much I am glad you liked it. Much love and hugs to you from me.< !signature--> Charisma oh yes it is. Thank you dear one. Much love and hugs to you from me. Mr. Balladeer Too true, my friend. Words are only one very small part of communicating. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sometimes everything that needs to be said can be said with the eyes. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh yeah............I liked this one. Too many words can spoil a mood and I love those QUIET intimate times where nothing need be said but a whole conversation takes place. Wonderfully said my friend. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I really liked this one. We have been thinking of the same things. great writing. Love and light. Richard |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Wonderfully written, Karen....It most always can be seen in the eyes...Like a window to the soul..I liked this much... Hugs.. ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
She has a thought most strange of communication neanderthal with its harmful deprivation Some times words are not needed, beautifully written. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
stay away from neanderthal men haa..keep dancing..enjoyed hon.. hugs ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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