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Maybe I Am |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Maybe I Am ~*Marge Tindal*~ Maybe I am soft and romantic. Yet I wonder at the strength in me. I hear the stroke of harps where there are no angels. My mind sees visions I've only dreamed of. My wants are few ... and include you. Maybe I am soft and romantic. Pretending does not hold me in mesmerize. For I feel too much to pretend. I touch the arc of the rainbow in you. Worrying that you will fade with the sun. I cry at the drop of a heart. Maybe I am soft and romantic. I fully comprehend the chances we take. Understanding that a passionate heart can break. I say let it be, if only for a little while. I dream that upon awakening - you will have dreamed of me too. I try to share all that I am. And hope that it is enough. Maybe I am soft and romantic. Then again, maybe I'm a dreamer. But, Oh how I dream. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-04-2001).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderfully expressed, Marge! Beautifully penned!! Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You cry at the drop of a heart, Marge? Then you must be bawling your eyes out 'cause you make my heart frop with every poem like this you write.......beautiful  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How incredibly perfect in every way. This is wonderful Marge and I loved every word I read. My very favorite being 'Maybe I Am' *grin* well said, dear one. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
"OK when I stop laughing to the point of crying at Mr.Deers reply, I will say, Marge it has been the most wonderful pleasure to find a loving person as yourself and I am not dreaming you are so very real and a blessing, you keep being soft, romantic and most of all you keep on dreaming, you have touched alot of lives with that HUGE HEART of yours, mine for sure. Love ya, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
From my own POV - there is no compliment given that exceeds "I feel it myself and wish I'd written it myself" - Please accept this in that spirit. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you for always being here. You're a jewel. Balladeer~ Awwwwww ! You're so cute when you do those frip-frops ! I just love you ! StarTime~ Well, your reply was certainly perfect. Thank you so much. Cerenity~ Your friendship touches my heart, and for that I am thankful. Isn't that Balladeer just a cutie ? ! Wilfred~ What a sincerely sweet response. I thank you from this little heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--what a beauty true you write with your maybe heart...hugs! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, You certainly are... everything you write...and more..huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You are everything everybody says you are, and that's a lot of good things So glad I know you Liz |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Marge....you are all soft and romantic...and a lot more how I love your writings...and these one was superb as always. (((Hugs)) Charisma |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
What a great poem, I enjoyed every word of it, thank you |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MARGE, you dare say 'maybe'... You are all and more of these qualities which is why I treasure you, my friend, always... A splendid challenge response sweetie hugs2u |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, no MAYBE about it, you are all that and then some. And you should have added that you are the brightest and the best. Because you know it's the clear truth. Love it Margie girl, I really do Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ *Hugs* for your thoughts, sweet sis. Wynter~ Maybe ! Love ya' gal ! Elizabeth~ And you know the feelings are returned, my friend. Charisma~ Thank you from the bottom of my little heart. AgustP~ Thank you very much. Dani~ Well ... if you say so ! LOL ! Thanks, gal. Marsha~ Now, I'd have to send you a big HUG for that. Thank you, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh Marge... this is so pretty. ~I cry at the drop of a heart~ Beautifully written poem. Hugs, Deb |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Maybe??? MAYBE???? Just a little...lol... What a wonderful write Marge...and you are funny, and caring, and smart...and quite a poet! Hugging the monitor again. love to you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge if this is you as a dream then all I can say is dream on, for you do it so well as you do all things. Btw I love it when 'Deer's heart goes 'frop' too. write on in song Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aw Marge...no wonder you are loved by all.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And maybe I ain't a cowboy.....yeah right. You are the romantic and you are the heart and you are the spirit that makes this home shine. I know this because of the large statue that Ron erected outside the doors to Passions in the likeness of you. Hugging you for this one my friend. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ I so appreciate you, my friend. Serenity~ And my thanks to you for reviving this inspirational challenge. I got that *hug* .... Kethry~ Thanks, doll. Karilea~ You know that I so treasure the loving friendships. *Hugs* MarkB~ Cowboy ! Now if I believe all that - I need boots ! *wink* You are such a doll ! Sending lots of little squeezy {{{hugs}}} ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Marge, you threw a little wrench in the gears with your nice spin on this one... I realy liked how you done it. Got my attention right from the get go. I like the thought of no definites.... Just perhaps you are and let the reader decide. I for one believe that you are and know that you are the other.... Love ya, Bob <>< |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
okay so maybe it is made of snow but that don't mean it couldn't be so. Now I said SNOW not SNOWJOB........so don't go a pullen that one on me either. Any way you look at it........WE NEED YOU!!!!!!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
maybe you're a dreamer? lol... uh... well, maybe your dreaming is lovely poetry straight from the heart.... and maybe dreams come true... y'know? ..... loved this.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Maybe you have immense talent and flair - When one needs a friend, you're always there. Maybe you have your own doubts and fears But you lend a shoulder for other folks tears. Passions' cheerleader, your caring heart beams - We all benefit from this dreamer's dreams!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LightHouseBob~ Yeah ... that's me alright - little wench er, wrench ! LOL ! Thank you for the nice compliment. MarkB~ Okay, babe ! You win - AS USUAL ! *wink* Love ya' Doreen~ I'm always glad to see you reading me. I thank you. Suthern~ Awwwww ! Now ya' made me tear-eyed. What a sweetie you are. I thank you so much for your tender heart. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
pretending does not hold me in mesmerize for i feel too much to pretend lovely lines here, marge...and im glad that you have given so much of yourself to be able to feel so...  |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
To be or not to be, that is the ? And one things for certain, you are..! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge--I know one thing for certain, a beautiful poet you are...capitally done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ I feel that it's all about giving. Thank you. Lucky~ *Hugs*, my friend, for your sweet thoughts. PoeMinister~ I appreciate the beautiful comment. Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ < !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Awww Marge, you ol' romantic you! Of course you're romantic, and much more! Loved this. jwesley |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I'm with you on this Marge I recently wrote a poem "Incurable Romantic" yet I'm sure I want no cure LOL Hope |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marge, a dreamer beyond and above the norm. Wonderful write. Parker |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ this shines with such beauty, I enjoyed your sharing of who you are....hugs to you.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ Guilty as charged ! Thank you, my friend. HopeS~ Hip Hip Hooray for the 'No-Cure' technique ! Thanks for the read. Parker~ You got me pegged for sure. Thanks for enjoying. GreenEyes~ Thank you for the uplifting reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
You are truly a spot of sunshine in everyones heart... reading above me...I am in awe of the feelings you instill in all these people...you bring out the best in all of us Marge... *hugs* I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Margie *bravo* this is so beautifully penned, you have done a most delightful job with this challenge...well penned indeed hon ~HUGS~ Tracie~ P.S you are all this and more Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Breathe~ I thank you so very much for your comments. The circle of friendship grows with each new hand grasped. Isn't this just the greatest place to be ?? Yes ... I think so too ! Tracie~ My little friend, you just have the nicest way of saying things. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"...for i feel too much to pretend"... love that line and...maybe you are..a romantic..but i personally think the "maybe" can be dropped  very wonderful marge! hugs, g "there is no 'best' in a world of individuals" -unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ Thanks for your sweet comments. Well ..... just maybe I am ~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and a dreamer you will always be! |
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