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In Our Dark. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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I never knew that the night was beautiful until I saw it through your eyes passionate eyes that pierced the darkness finding my own eyes as they searched searched for a heart in the black you opened your arms and took me in covered me in your warm, loving cloak and in your arms, I found a haven from the world of light that I left to an indigo world, you welcomed me again the stars began their crystalline melody and you lifted my head to your face bringing your lips to mine in a delicate touch and we danced, danced through the night and I was alive again. . . in our dark ------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven love, WOW, this is utterly truly just amazingly beautiful. You really are excelling yourself love, you truly are. I really love this one, I truly do. Just magnificent love xx Take care kid Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Did I mention this kind of work is my favorite of yours?  Love the night...and the mystery in it... Beautiful work. Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, ..."And I was alive again, in our dark". Haunting, enchanting, exquisite. Much love, Elise |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, Light or dark you always shine. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I pray that what you write is NOT a dream. You deserve a love 24hrs not just in your dreams. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
awwww Sven each time I read you I am amazed at the beautiful words you write..... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Seems like the happiest times of my life were in the dark. This is wonderful. Sandra |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You might have the odd dalliance in the dark but Sven you are a child of the light, and you always shine so bright... Beautiful again with that mystical quality *sigh* Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
You look good in this.  I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, the night is beautiful! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwww Sven this is soooooooo beautifully penned....love it as always  Charisma |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Doing some catchup PoetFriend Sven and I'm pleased to have come across this terrific poem you've shared... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
WOW,MY FRIEND JUST LOVED IT |
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