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Fading Love |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Though words of love would mean so much and bedroom roses to adorn yet silence greets me with his touch to leave me feeling full forlorn. Hypothesis of reasons why bizarre discussions do not change I'm still ignored and hung to dry wishing my life could re-arrange. When thoughts so good cannot translate into his honest efforts true I feel the love slowly abate and know I must soon say adieu. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, Sandra. Very beautifully written. Denise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a sad one but nicely done sandra..HUGS always sad to say adieu ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's always hard when you know that feeling. . . well written Sandra. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
heartfelt poem Catalinamoon. Sorrowful yet final. Nicely written Rich |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
huge hug, I do wish that your poems could spring from a happier source. I hope that they are helping to see the pain, take care, well written piece. thanks for sharing. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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